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12-16-04, 06:54 AM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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Suspence
IP: A7C4 B5D2
yo, its so confusin' your ready for it but cant expect wats next......
think it'll be a cat runnin past,but your filled wit Suspence the cold sweat trickles down your throat, hopin its nothin' but then"SHIT" what the "Fuck wuz that" you scream while Duckin' you turn around and look but theres's just a shadow of Darkness just then you look again you see a car full of Black men......( no racist) Firin' Rounds like it wuz no one's Buisness You count how many bodies hit and how many miss'es.. Runnin' not expectin whats commin up, you pray,to god wishin' for good luck, thinkin of the cops and the Customs and the Judiciary they puttin' you as a witness while you think "visually" Then suddenly you get it in the arm then again in the chest... while you pray to god how you could have a more peacefull death.. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH" you wake up tryin' to scream, Shit,fuck wuz that close this wuz all just a fukin dream'
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12-16-04, 06:56 AM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: A7C4 B5D2
yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo sum feed back peepz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aiight
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12-16-04, 07:58 AM
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Deadly Powers Unleashed
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IP: 055E 63A5
you need to work on insitefulness..........................overall, vocab is okay, and need to work on rhyming a bit, overall decent
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12-16-04, 11:26 PM
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 806A 6087
aight ....thnx y ouppin 4 feed backm................................
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