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Old 01-15-05, 03:24 PM   #1
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Topic- Feelings Of War...
you leave your home town because of a war and it was going to be bombed...so there was panic and you come back and its in ruins...describe your feelings about the ruins or about the war and everything else involved...

5 days to drop after check in

-Parallel

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Old 01-15-05, 03:26 PM   #2
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•Para¶el• has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 03:26 PM.
 
Old 01-15-05, 04:46 PM   #3
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 04:46 PM.
 
Old 01-15-05, 11:58 PM   #4
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Im just posting to see my sig.........lmao........
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Old 01-16-05, 03:21 PM   #5
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yo final get at me with your collab verse...i jsut fisnhed mine im about to work on the battle verse now...but yea PM it to me or something...and let me know the fonts n shit you want it...pz
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Old 01-18-05, 11:20 PM   #6
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Alright i kinda twisted the topic but its to do with a war do i kinda dissed this real annoying ugly fat bitch in my class in school i hope you feel i wa son topic n shit but here anyway...:

Feelings of War..
When you always said shit to me, wasn’t Terrifying
Saying you’ll get people after me is just like Lying
Your ugly, I aint never afraid to tell a straight up Poser
Get off my shoulder, feels like im losing my Composer
I hated to see your face at school, always so Scary
Even others agreed and hided there eyes Temporary
You can go ahead and mumble, trying to be Native
You look white and sound like a man, so Negative
I wish you never came to are school, no really Leave
Makes me feel like dropin dead, for a little Relieve
Your rolls shake so much, I almost jumped Away
In ways that cant be said, pretty much leave, Okay
Mumbling more words, I didn’t ask for you to Confess
Its no test, you wont elevate & change the Process
You don’t even have a atoms-apple, such a Mystery
Your like a tom boy might as well get plastic-Surgery
Are you mentally challenged cause you go to Resource
Or forced, probably just dumb on the wrong Course
Acting like your in the cool group, but was Rejected
Fact got up we could tell you were never Respected
You didn’t even have the intelligence of a 1 year Old
Almost says your name wouldn’t get out like it Should
Your momies like your little maid, slave and your Nurse
Everything in your life went wrong, probably a Curse..
-Parallel
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Old 01-20-05, 02:53 PM   #7
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turned on the television a state of panic is announced
that world war 3 is coming with countries we cant pronounce
took the first plane to the farthest place where we were safe
from the united states i dont wanna become another grave
4 years pass to be exact 4 and 5 months, the war is done
immediately come back to New York,death lingers im stunned
buildings crumbled, steel bent, with the dead body stench
walked and stumbled,saw limbless children the blast left their legs swept
i wept and continued further to notice a certain building
empire state...worse then the world trade, water spilling
entire manhatten at ground level no towers scraping the sky
central park destroyed no place for kids to play on slides
radio is heard in the distance a man describing the situation
even though the war is finished they still didnt start the re-creation
how long has this city been like this, underground ruins
the worst example being shown to the people and students
its stupid the admirable bush expressed as the best and re-elected
but this faggot made this like it is no doubt this is expected
now were nervous everyday, too anxious we cant sleep
nothing but grief and misery plaguing the land of the free
this scene is coming soon if everything stays as they are now
our life,spouses, and kids gone...from bombs deployed in your hometown
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Old 01-20-05, 05:25 PM   #8
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lets get some votes...now.......uppinizzle......./
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Old 01-20-05, 05:44 PM   #9
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nobody votes on topicals...might as well stop doing them ...................................
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Old 01-20-05, 05:57 PM   #10
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uppin............................................. .
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Old 01-20-05, 09:10 PM   #11
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uppin............................................. .
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Old 01-20-05, 09:28 PM   #12
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Checking the polls............................................. ...
 
Old 01-21-05, 01:12 PM   #13
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uppin for some people to vote..................damn
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Old 01-21-05, 02:41 PM   #14
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Old 01-21-05, 08:34 PM   #15
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omg uppin...........................................
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