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05-12-04, 07:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
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IP: B498 633B
Yo rappin is my occupation and its real like a bullet blazin you through ya
dome, you can't touch me nor crush me cause im important like a tomb stone I aint the best yet but im workin my way up these other cats smart mouth like they can't be fucked up And in the dictionary im in the listing as unknown cause i be a mystery opinions is worshipped better than a king on the throne I don't gotta be rhymin on gats and killin cats cause im hot by speakin from the heart didn't you notice that lil shorty was on hardtimes thats why a bitch rhyme everyday struggle and hustle to make that doh half the time But im through wit it,don't fool wit it,cause I got to much to take care of And for my niggas who helped me this far i pay you back with my love Many niggas thought i was the same and wasn't turnin out to be nothin But now everytime i turn my head somebody need somethin But i don't hesitate i could be cold hearted and keep my shit to myself But loving is what i be before i be something else I got a steady roof over my head money aint a problem no more Don't mean it aint other struggles its always some more But I'm happin i rhyme as a result of what i feel And i finally reached the destination that i wished to fulfill Holla at ya girl |
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05-12-04, 09:42 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: B498 633B
I just need feedback
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05-12-04, 09:59 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 6270 CD5A
well ive seen a lot of things from you...u should work on not makin it so simple and predictable...wordplay was aiight, flow was straight it was aiight just work on complexity....structure and vocab stay up ma 1
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