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Old 11-12-04, 09:22 PM   #16
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and if votes are less then 2 lines i can dq the vote for dr becuase its not explained

but i didnt see your verse
 
Old 11-12-04, 09:34 PM   #18
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..aka about to lose to efusive...and thats a known fact
cause even at rapbattles kids are calling him wack
^^ok,....but weak punch..
^^that alone would get me the win...heh fuck it your done.

You'll never been known, tho normally I'd stop dudes...
No need when your success story is as long as a haiku
^^??..wasnt feelin it...
this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing
hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing
^^meh it was aight., nothin special
After this battle.. you gonna fall so get ready for a spankin
What goes up must comes down...I just described ya rankings
^^weak n wack...
Rap`s got you nowhere.. Your too simple and Write plain
But someday you'll go far... if you catch the right train
^^played..lmao...soo played
You tired of losing, but still ain’t switching the pace of history
Fuck it, Print my verse out and eat it, so you can taste victory
^^^played...wtf
God Damn!!!! I searched his battles and got hungry off text
Dude’s like corn on the cob, more you peel off the cornier it gets
^^ive heard this 100 times yo...
I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do,
If there's shadow of doubt, it's prolly NewPort standin behind you
^^^not so played, but it was like the only 1....!
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Fuck ya skill, Champs? LMAO, ya luck stops here...
& Even befo' u dropped cats wondered how you got here...
^^ok,punch ok opener...bout the same as e's
I rock fear, ya time hasn't got here, took a wrong damn turn...
E's been known to ass out like u had ya thong on backwards...
^^played....
you knew this'd happen, hate ta pull ya card n finish you in five...
computer nerd dun care if i hurt him..jus don't merk his hard drive..
^^this was koo
Ill snap words, you know u aint winning, don't fake it b...
Cuz damn, half the fucking planet has already taken E...
^^thought this was nice
abusively run efusive through, clean cut no bruise to suface...
beat me...com'on kid that only happens when i lose on purpose..
^^lol...
Fa sho, nam sayn, blah, i'm da bestest, ur da worsest...
& Sadly, that entire set up was better than ya verses...
^^nope...don't do that...lol
Ya worthless, son, watch me fucking blast ya fellas...
Leave a gap in ya chest so big it'd get ur asshole jealous...
^^ok decent closer.
efusive/i wasnt feeling ya 1st half of ya verse i thought it was weak shit..
as for the second half it was all played to death,nothin original in there..
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newport/couple original punches (personal)im votin 4 you cuz it wasnt played as hell....
flow was on point n content was better...
 
Old 11-12-04, 09:38 PM   #19
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Originally Posted by sdizzle
what the fuck newport cheated... its an automatic loss

& im reporting you in the mod lounge for abusing r power so many fucking times

u cant delete a vote... especially in a battle ur in

^this nigga buggin n shit...lol...can i vote on this battle?....
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Old 11-12-04, 09:40 PM   #20
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Efusive
this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing
hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing
After this battle.. you gonna fall so get ready for a spankin
What goes up must comes down...I just described ya rankings
You tired of losing, but still ain’t switching the pace of history
Fuck it, Print my verse out and eat it, so you can taste victory
I promise...I swear it...I'll show what damagin lines do,
If there's shadow of doubt, it's prolly NewPort standin behind you

Really hard-hittin punches right here. Flat out whooped em with these lines.

NewPort
Ill snap words, you know u aint winning, don't fake it b...
Cuz damn, half the fucking planet has already taken E...
Ya worthless, son, watch me fucking blast ya fellas...
Leave a gap in ya chest so big it'd get ur asshole jealous...
Those is the only lines I felt were decent. The 'like your verse' shit is type played. and the rest didnt really hit hard to me.

V/Efusive for better and harder hittin punches......
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Old 11-12-04, 09:41 PM   #21
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well wasnt feelin either verse really but vote has to go to newport for sum origanality...vote/newport
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Old 11-12-04, 10:21 PM   #22
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^doesnt count...why? cuase like NewPort said...its a 2 line explanation.


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Old 11-12-04, 10:26 PM   #23
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.:Jack Rackam:. doesnt count...why? hes not in the league...
unless hes an alias...and if so i want proof...
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Old 11-12-04, 11:46 PM   #24
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people outside the leauge are aloowed to vote aslong as we dont think it is DR... becuase if that was the case raw wouldnt count
 
Old 11-12-04, 11:54 PM   #25
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u dont get to decide the vote outcome on ur own battles
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Old 11-12-04, 11:56 PM   #26
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i know Schema does though
 
Old 11-12-04, 11:59 PM   #27
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this dude thinks he has a rep, he has to be bluffing
hes not Running on Empty...hes just Gassed over Nothing
^kinda played.. i didn't feel like pastin the others, but a few of these lines were played but others were very nice punches, multis were pretty good..

After this battle.. you gonna fall so get ready for a spankin
What goes up must comes down...I just described ya rankings
^this was original, very nice..

you knew this'd happen, hate ta pull ya card n finish you in five...
computer nerd dun care if i hurt him..jus don't merk his hard drive..
Ill snap words, you know u aint winning, don't fake it b...
Cuz damn, half the fucking planet has already taken E...
abusively run efusive through, clean cut no bruise to suface...
beat me...com'on kid that only happens when i lose on purpose..
^ur verse was the more creative of the two, and more original.. except a couple of times u mentioned how ef could beat u but only when u lose on purpose.. that was prolly the only line u needed to remove.. this did seem like a quick drop but u had sum funny content and sum nice metas and ur punches were aight.. both y'all coulda came harder but ey, it's not for ur record..
my vote/ Newport

P.S. good luck with this.. i wanna see who's the champ after this one.. seems like it's gettin' serious in here..
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Old 11-13-04, 12:00 AM   #28
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WHOA HOT BATTLE

efusive...of course like alwayz ui gotz dope punches and personals was killin...ur structure was dope fam i was feelin it..multi's not too many...ur Flow was hood.....im feelin this shyt fo sho...ur shyts killin it dayUM!!

newport: Once again u rippin shyt up fam...Nice verse fo sho..u had a lil bit betta punches and structure in this one so therefore u get the win in my eyes....Nice shyt though try and add more vocab in there tooo

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Old 11-13-04, 12:08 AM   #29
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tied 3-3 uppin bitches
 
Old 11-13-04, 12:43 AM   #30
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efusive:

you had some really dope punches in ya verse i was feeling them but a couple were played but not overly played just seen the same concept's and/or set-ups before... it was a good verse though... good punches.. personals were average seeing as there were no direct personals..flow was decent structure was good.

newport:

you put a little more effort into this battle than you usually do and it helped a bit.. your closer was a sick ass bar and probably the best of the battle.. flowed consistenly.. a couple decent punches but the rest were really good.. personals.. didnt see any direct ones but still a good verse.


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