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Come dope..

In...

Av vs. Auspicious
Evolve vs. Feeble
Horud Skys vs. B2K

In .. 10 -12 ?

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Workers Union

SPul is my Bitch.........

this is all i had time for .. well have a rematch whenever you want

Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek
Cuz like a 'Shootin Star..
ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak
Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help
U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself
Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin
Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz
Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit
B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick..
Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix
DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks
Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong
So if theres a woman behind every great man….
………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On?

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Workers Union

SPul is my Bitch.........

Its obvious….
dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay
He throws his …….
hands in the air at my command ………..
…………………..like it was hearing test Thursday!
It’s ok….
Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow
Fuck’n hippie…..
Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow!
I know…
This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand
Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland!
Hypochrit!.......
You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute
Fuck you pay me?........
This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute!
You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple
Checked in late…..
I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental!
I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected
Allegory ripped ya………
even the people who beat u aren’t respected!

..Pretty Good Read...Dimense Had Played Punches In Some Parts (Berlin Wall Line...Heard It Before...I Believe Against The Same Person).....Walter Had Corny Punches In Some Parts (Disney Land Line & GTA 3 Line) And Your Opener Lost Me.....But You Both Dropped Dope In Some Parts....Good Read...

Quotables:

^1st Line Good Personal, 2nd Line Was Nice


^1st Line Was Played, 2nd Line Was Funny..LoL

Dimense Also Had A Nice Closer....


^1st Line Was Funny, 2nd Line Dope


^1st Line Dope, 2nd Line Couldve Been Worded Better....Sounds Like You Mean You And Him...

Punches - Walter (Threw More)
Personals - Dimense (Walter Only Mentioned Past Battles)
Wordplay - Tie
Structure - Dimense
Vocab - Walter

Vote - Walter....You Barely Got This Honestly.....This Should Be A Close One....But You Get My Vote For Merely Throwing More Punches Than Your Opponent....Nice Work From You Both Though...

^ no this really shouldn't be that close ...

Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek
Cuz like a 'Shootin Star..
ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak
First line was technically a punch but it was just, basically filler wasnt really a hitting punch..same for the second... ehh punches...
Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help
U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself
me and walter weren't tag team champs. . your lines so far seem very rushed...
Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin
Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz
avg punch...
Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit
B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick..
badly worded.
Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix
DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks
no. just no.
Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong
So if theres a woman behind every great man….
………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On?
i dunno who u were calling a man and who a woman but this was played either way . .

Walts verse:
dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay
He throws his …….
hands in the air at my command ………..
…………………..like it was hearing test Thursday!
not hard hitting but a little funny... you get a "haha" for this line.
It’s ok….
Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow
Fuck’n hippie…..
Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow!
a little funny, you get an "lol" and 5/10 hard hitting... the 1-2 punch like tokesters tourney...
I know…
This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand
Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland!
no... walter... i wish i knew you... id smack you for writing this...just no.
Hypochrit!.......
You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute
Fuck you pay me?........
This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute!
you get a "haha" for this lines funniness...almost an Lol...
You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple
Checked in late…..
I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental!
you get a LOL for this lines funniness and it was hittin at a 7 /10 ...
I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected
Allegory ripped ya………
even the people who beat u aren’t respected!
that musta hurt his feelings, just a little..nice closer..

Dimense... come harder next week ... Seriously... try.
Walter... come harder also... ur verse was pretty good, but.. i need more material to read, yo. from both you hoes.

v/ walter.

Personally i thought both verses should've
been alot better from u 2 but I felt this was
the only good line in the battle...



still at the same time Walters was more consistent. Sorry Dimense
ur my boy and had u came in this u would've won easy. U cant just
count on one line to win. That's rookie stuff, u know that.

vote - Walter

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek
Cuz like a 'Shootin Star..
ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak
^ ^ eh, ok

Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help
U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself
^ ^ eh.. ok attempt at a personal

Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin
Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz
^ ^ wasnt feeling this either.

Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit
B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick..
^ ^ nice I liked

Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix
DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks
^ ^ wasnt feelin it

Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong
So if theres a woman behind every great man….
………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On?
^ ^ good closer made me laugh.

overall Dimense Ive seen much better from u.
I was looking forward for a good showing but I know
every week cant be the same, People have lives.


Its obvious….
dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay
He throws his …….
hands in the air at my command ………..
…………………..like it was hearing test Thursday!
^ ^ ehh ok opener..seen better.


It’s ok….
Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow
Fuck’n hippie…..
Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow!
^ ^ old concept it was ok.

I know…
This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand
Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland!
^ ^ ok. leaning towards not good.

Hypochrit!.......
You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute
Fuck you pay me?........
This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute
^ ^ eh ...

You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple
Checked in late…..
I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental!
^ ^ pussy lines always interesting..ok

I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected
Allegory ripped ya………
even the people who beat u aren’t respected!
^ ^ straight to the point punch..ok

walter also seen better from you.
but Dimense had the line of the battle
but u beat him on consistensy on every punch.


v/Walter

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Aight battle fellas...good read

Dimense's:

Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek
Cuz like a 'Shootin Star..
ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak
^meh basic..played
Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help
U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself
^Nice first line...2nd line played
Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin
Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz
^I liked this one..nice personal/wordplay
Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit
B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick..
^horrible wording..could of been way better
Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix
DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks
^nope
Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong
So if theres a woman behind every great man….
………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On?
^lol nice closer....

Walter's:

Its obvious….
dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay
He throws his …….
hands in the air at my command ………..
…………………..like it was hearing test Thursday!
^nice..thats some funny shit
It’s ok….
Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow
Fuck’n hippie…..
Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow!
^nice wordplay
I know…
This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand
Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland!
^nope..wasn't feeling that at all
Hypochrit!.......
You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute
Fuck you pay me?........
This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute!
^no..nice try
You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple
Checked in late…..
I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental!
^lol..nice wordplay again
I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected
Allegory ripped ya………
even the people who beat u aren’t respected!
^nice closer..and personal

overall Walter Wall gets this
Just a stronger verse..with more concictantancy
Dimense had a couple good lines
but

v/ Walter

If I have to break this down, I will. However, pretty much everyone else has broken it down and quoted the quotables. Dimense, I was bitched at for using the DIck are for chicks line when I first got back...so you shoulda known better, lol. Anyway, Both of you had some really played, or really corny lines. You both had a couple nice ones though too. Overall, Walt just came more consistent with a better verse.

Vote ~ WW

Walter: Would you like to retain your MW title or battle for the Heavyweight next week?

I'll be happy to take HW from you feebs, maybe Ill even try