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Old 06-02-06, 02:14 AM   #1
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Old 06-02-06, 02:38 AM   #2
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picture of the month? fuck nah she can't hacket
the hoe can't even swim.. someone get this bitch a life jacket
u aint shit.. anyone can look scary with long black hair
walk on water? can't beleive u dumb enough to try that dare
this bitch must be lost... na u retarded for god sakes
bitch always carries a light and still walks str8 into lakes
u so thin, can't afford food.. so i geuss im'a kill the scrub shit
i use rags to wash dishes.. u use them to wear in public
fuck ya wits, look at the built of this chick
so skinny... her dildo is a fuckin tooth pick
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fuck that ugly hoe
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Old 06-03-06, 05:06 AM   #3
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picture of the month? who the fuck picked this hoe
she rockin the same shit thats in my bathroom window
walkin up on water shit prolly not deep
pale as fuck need sun for 10 hot weeks
i'll fuck her tho just give me a dutch and some dro
a 5th of henny and some moe and i'll be ready to go
i'll show this bitch wut the pipe bout
skeet on her white blouse
break her whole lamp just to say i put her lights out
SIKE! this bitch couldnt get a dollar and a taste
and she look like she took a box of powder in the face.......... lmao

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man this site is the wrst! i see everybody get battles when they post but when i post niggas dnt wanna dare take that challenge.........PUSSY!
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lol actually... no, i'm not battlin u...
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Old 06-03-06, 05:49 AM   #4
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WTF?!..at people dropping rap battle verses?!...now ima do this topically!..WORD!




She looks to a depth of extent not seen.
So now one else can see her own reflection on the scene
She travels with fear and bestows only pain
to trample and triumph over any poony idea from a brain
rain, as thats the way the tears fall from others
as the weathers stirs and blows winds to wind up humans in gutters
She glides not walks , she grins not smiles
as your look into the heavens, 666 is the only number she dials
as you engulf with emotions, to wild to control.
see approaches with her presenc, your screaming while she's taking your soul!
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Old 06-03-06, 06:26 PM   #5
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WTF?!..at people dropping rap battle verses?!...now ima do this topically!..WORD!




IM NOT JUST PPL IM YA AUDIO LEADER.........AND THIS IS WUT I DO LOL!
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Old 06-05-06, 04:52 AM   #6
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*1st Person*

I Stand Over, No, On Top This Water Burning My Feet Raw,
At The Bottom I See Stars, Eyes Glitter As I Rock The Balance of Life, Like a See Saw,
First I Was A Beautiful Woman, Holding My Light To See My Path,
As Skin Turned Gray From Years Waiting, There Is one Question I Ask,
Evil In-Wraps, My Soul Into A Ball Of Cold Contempt for this World,
My Eyes Devour Night and The Wishes of The Young And The old,
Standing In My Spot for Years, Light Shining On My Lantern,
Hair Waves In the Wind, As I Search For Some Kind Of Answer,
The Shadows Have Swallowed Me Til I Became Something Else, Evil I Can't Take No more,
It's Like An Escape From hell, I Glare As I Realize, I Don't Know What I'm Waiting For...

hm..
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Old 06-07-06, 11:02 AM   #7
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can u believe this, do our eyes decieve us,
got a bitch walkin on water like she jesus,
she aint appealin, im sure dis doesnt please us,
she aint movin from the looks she on some trees stuff,
shes stuck, lookin like she got a special delivery,
kinda of funny tho, she like a bootleg statue of liberty,
its official like a ref wit a whistle dog, officially,
she a OG, in her right hand is where da pistol be, (lol)
ya gotta be shittin me, i wonda what she catches da fishes wit,
she wearin da same shit i be washin my dishes wit,
stitches in her clothes, same shit dat da snitches get,
she look like a g, like if u stare u'll get pistol whipped,
eitha dat or she been smokin da official shit, im gone

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Old 06-08-06, 03:43 AM   #8
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enchanted, wit her lamp lit, uncoverin Alantis//
a satanic evangelist thas benign and cancerous//
answer this, if linen and sea make connection//
doesn't that symbolize the sky's are deception//
the reflection is deeper and darker than the ocean//
not flyin but floatin, skin is pale and broken//
provokin wit unspoken words like the omen//
devoted to stolen lives held as an token//
the ends approachin, but ya don't see the signs//
visions of ghosts controllin our very lives//
the ones u idolizes will end up to demise//
screamin cries from the lantern to the heavens in the sky//
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Old 06-09-06, 03:57 PM   #9
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bitch so fuckin ugly she probably has a penis
used ta make her luv me but i cant just believe this
i got the hoe believin she's a female version of jesus
me and her used ta walk on water during the weekends
this bitch got a fish tail right where her feet is
i guess that explains why she always smelt like fish
and every single day i went thru hell wit this bitch
she'd walk on water and laugh at me drowning
and i never found her in a diffrent sorrounding
spent our time in the ocean and later in bed
always be moaning it wasnt hard ta make her wet
she was cold and wet i told u she moaned in bed
but i didnt tell you that she rose from the dead
when i found that shit out it all made sense
that explains exactly why she aint got no breasts
she already had died and has the worst breath
she's sick of walkin on water so i have ta carry her
the WORST mistake ever is that i actually MARRIED HER!!
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Old 06-10-06, 12:57 AM   #10
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First off, I need to get one thing straight, MAN//
This hoe needs to get closer to that latern so she can get a fuckin' suntan//
She's walkin' on water like she died for I sins//
But she looks like the emo version of Mary Mag-di-lyn//
She's walkin' on water, tryna get fly//
Fly enough to be Kanye and Touch The Sky//
She's comin to the clouds, girl, reach for heaven//
Let The Great Lord light your lantern and jump for Cloud 7.

(Sorry if it sucked... I was scared to post it but how else am I gonna get better? :\ )
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Old 06-10-06, 03:09 AM   #11
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lol ike 2 topicals and 5 battle verses..
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Old 06-13-06, 01:44 PM   #12
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lol ike 2 topicals and 5 battle verses..

shits funnier in battle verse form... word
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Old 06-16-06, 02:20 AM   #13
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shits funnier in battle verse form... word

then maybe i'll write one of those too!
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