u want me to spit first or u gon go

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THE TRUTH,THE WHOLE TRUTH, AND NOTHIN BUT THE THE TRUTH......SO TRUST ME IT AIN'T WORTH IT FAM...NO,NO,NO

u spit first i ain't that good on punches but i'm going to try what is the rules

hey what it is................................................ ....................

are you prewriting or something
fuck it i'll go

rip verse

" my rhymes are lyrical are the geting through to you*
running from me searching punchlines on google*
go ahead and do it and you still can't beat me*
and they told you a lie when they said the truth will set you free*
cause you can't survive, i'll leave you lyrically decline*
watch you put lipstick on ya head to make up your mind*
T o R ip U R ight to H ell*
but a lie is what tha hell you name spell*
you need to retire cause your shit ain't hot*
you couldn't spit fire if I recorded it and put it in you vocal box*
be honest i could kill you with one bar..a skill... but you don't own it*
so tell me the truth hurt's don't it

yo truth you done writing yet lol
cmon drop somthing
3/0 ko cool hit me back
first to 5 uppin

naw i ain't gotta prewrite shit it's just i got school nigga and i wouldn't waste my writtens, on another note i'm bout to spit so we can get this ova wit

if anybody beat me...it's not u*
fuck google,u wuz better off typin that shit on yahoo*
LIL RIP that's all,i'll leave a BIG TEAR*
that's THE TRUTH,THE WHOLE TRUTH,AND NOTHIN BUT THE TRUTH i swear
like a album that drop,i'mma watch u fall*
how u man by day & pussy by night like Ru Paul*
then u proly broke as hell,u a disgrace*
hold a dollar so hard u can put a bruse on G.W.'s face*
plus yo girl on my TWIX,and she All In The Mix*
i'm like KELLY at yo grave dog Rest In Piss*
like my flows in a spell,they like "dude u curse"*
ask that chic from aftermath,she'll tell u THE TRUTH hurt

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THE TRUTH,THE WHOLE TRUTH, AND NOTHIN BUT THE THE TRUTH......SO TRUST ME IT AIN'T WORTH IT FAM...NO,NO,NO

Both Emcees Came Too Weak On This One.Some Elevation Is Definately Needed Here.Both Have The Basic Concept Of Dissing But You Still Need Work On That And Punches.Out Of The Two Id Say Lil Rip Had The Better Verse With The Few Good Disses He Used.

Vote-Lil Rip

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Heres the lowdown Lil Rip the line about "watch you put lipstick on your head to make up your mind" come on dawg you got it off the jokes page on the internet cause I read it online one day.As far as the rest of your verse you need to just keep working on your punches I can tell you'll get better. Now for The Truth I like the way you came, you had nice punches, nice bar structure, and a good flow. You came hard but I can tell you capable of coming harder. But in the end my vote:THE TRUTH

hey truth some hot shit let get mo votes..................uppin

uppin for votes............................................. ....

your both wack and need to elavate but truth got this one

Uppin............................................. ..............

lil rip gets my vote.

he had better flow and vocab
plus the truth feed of his verse with the internet sites

vote: lil rip

hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117947

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still uppin cmon i'll return the favors .................................................. ...............