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Expired battle win - closed

Wordz Ahgod has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-06 08:05 PM.

~Luciano~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-06 02:53 AM.

Listen...

ill smack u wit my feet till u cant blink beat me?.u think wrong
in this bout u gettin left assed out like a fat kid in a pink thong
all ya drops are shitty..really i was wonderin like whats tha funk?
I Told this Bum to "Put ya Handz up" & he Punched the Trunk
ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops
u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops
fuck it your thru..16 lines? yu shoulda only went a round or 2
not just in rap..but even on the fuckin map im lookin down on u
u smell like feecees u cant reach me cuz im outta ya reaches
u'll never MAN up & beat me cuz lauderdale nuthin but beaches
you aint a vet yet? i wanna kno...all your rhymes who wrote it?
all your shots @ me never were seen like a goalie blindfolded
here ill give u a tip bitch....get a .45 ski mask and then go rob
all of your Wordz make no Cents..... like a worker with no Job
u gotta grow up to get at me face it ya lackin maturity brotha
ill Beat
on this "EyeDendty" like jackin off on ya social security numba's


**Put ya handz up...in his avy.
**His old name was "EyeDendty"
**hes from Lauderdale..

i only explained shit..cuz i knew he was

*Nuff Said*

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aight, u aint never spit a good bar, but u wanna hand me a loss?
thats like trying to beat a video game....while the shit's still on pause
plus ur rap-style is basic, u actually think u rhyme?
I'll throw a bag of quarters at ur head, just to change ur mind
then after that, I'll leave ur body damaged
cut ur head off just cuz I cant stand the body language
cuz dawg, A.I just looks at u, and knows luciano is not heavy
this aint nintendo, u cant blow the cartridge so get off The Games dick already
befor u try to get at me, understand that I'll spit bars to reach u
cuz fuckin ya bitch to classical music is the only way Id ever come peaceful
in otherwords, we could fight for days, its no hassle, we dont like yo ways
ur wak writz wouldn't be hot if we left it over night in the microwave
so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami
but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties
I understand u aint a real nigga yet, but I'll spit at ur ligaments
u shouldve quit early like pregnant bitches smoking too many cigarettes

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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

aight, u aint never spit a good bar, but u wanna hand me a loss?
thats like trying to beat a video game....while the shit's still on pause
aight
plus ur rap-style is basic, u actually think u rhyme?
I'll throw a bag of quarters at ur head, just to change ur mind
played....
then after that, I'll leave ur body damaged
cut ur head off just cuz I cant stand the body language
nah weak...
cuz dawg, A.I just looks at u, and knows luciano is not heavy
this aint nintendo, u cant blow the cartridge so get off The Games dick already
weak......
befor u try to get at me, understand that I'll spit bars to reach u
cuz fuckin ya bitch to classical music is the only way Id ever come peaceful
aight i feel that a bit...
in otherwords, we could fight for days, its no hassle, we dont like yo ways
ur wak writz wouldn't be hot if we left it over night in the microwave
ha better...
so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami
but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties
weak...
I understand u aint a real nigga yet, but I'll spit at ur ligaments
u shouldve quit early like pregnant bitches smoking too many cigarettes
aight ending....

a few qouteables an a few hits...
couple played lines to thou...




Listen...

ill smack u wit my feet till u cant blink beat me?.u think wrong
in this bout u gettin left assed out like a fat kid in a pink thong
played
all ya drops are shitty..really i was wonderin like whats tha funk?
I Told this Bum to "Put ya Handz up" & he Punched the Trunk
weak...
ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops
u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops
aight...
fuck it your thru..16 lines? yu shoulda only went a round or 2
not just in rap..but even on the fuckin map im lookin down on u
simple weak..
u smell like feecees u cant reach me cuz im outta ya reaches
u'll never MAN up & beat me cuz lauderdale nuthin but beaches
nah not a good diss nor punch
you aint a vet yet? i wanna kno...all your rhymes who wrote it?
all your shots @ me never were seen like a goalie blindfolded
aight
here ill give u a tip bitch....get a .45 ski mask and then go rob
all of your Wordz make no Cents..... like a worker with no Job
ok kinda played already
u gotta grow up to get at me face it ya lackin maturity brotha
ill Beat
on this "EyeDendty" like jackin off on ya social security numba's
ok ending...

no real good hits at all besides the ending being ya best hit other then that ya verse was lacking alot...


vote: eye's for having more qouteables

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NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!!!

lmao @ this hateing ass ni99a wit a 9-8 rec

nice try

Uppppin..................

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wat ever..............,,,,,,,,,,

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

pollz.............................................

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Authentik Intelligence

Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Luciana-Came pretty good had some good punches throughout your verse personals were appealing and effective...no problem with ur structure flowed on through which made ur punches noticeable.

favorite lines:

"ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops
u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops"

overall:6/10

Wordz ah-god:Came pretty hard aswell, i liked your wordplay and comical punches had me laughin and ur shit was appealing...structure wudnt bad had nice flow to bring out ur punches..personals was iight no complaints...

favorite lines:


"so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami
but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties
"

overall: 7/10

v/wordz ah-god

rtf if i get into a battle.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Thanks for the vote and feed back..this been up for dayz and wether I win or Luc wins...I honestly jus wanna get this out the way.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

ay man, you want to return the favor on my battle verse rexless with an honest vote? thanks.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

LMAO this was a good battle funny as fuck,.. good luck
to both...

stay up

thanks dawg. lets uppin for some votes on the real man.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..