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Evolution 2 28.57%
Non Capisco 5 71.43%
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Old 03-13-05, 01:43 AM   #1
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Non Capisco vs Evolution

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Old 03-13-05, 01:44 AM   #2
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Non Capisco has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:44 AM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 01:47 AM   #3
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Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:47 AM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 01:57 AM   #4
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quick spit ...drop a link and i'll RTF

hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack

Rock Paper Scissors... scissors cuts paper...
the dice was some lame comedian back in the day who was funny but got retarded.
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Old 03-13-05, 02:04 AM   #5
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This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?â€
I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate
Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is
Quote:
Originally Posted by Non Capisco
...jus elevate


Key'd

I said put 6 Lines MAX and the bitch gonna try and be slick
& put 6 UNLIMITED Lines... nice try fag...
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Old 03-13-05, 07:00 PM   #6
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uppin this battle
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Old 03-14-05, 07:10 PM   #7
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Voted For: Evolution

Evolution:

This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
aint feelin it man.....4/10
He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?â€
that was decent....5/10
I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
not that good of a punch....4/10
Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate
Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is

Quote:
Originally Posted by Non Capisco
...jus elevate
wouldve been better if you quoted him sayin somethin about HIMSELF...5/10

non whateva:
hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
played to fuck...1/10
.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
aint feelin it too much...1/10
Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack
naw...not too good..2/10

both sides need to elevate
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Old 03-14-05, 09:18 PM   #8
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ahh just checkin polls evolution got this easy....
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Old 03-14-05, 09:41 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by lyricalflowz
Voted For: Non Capisco

Evolution, your verse was to basic. Your not gonna be able to win battles with stuff like that. You have potential no doubt about it. Some of your shit was played like that "Who is he"? line. The attempted personals weren't working for ya either man. Try using more wordplay, and try using more creative metaphors.


i have no potential?

shut, up, i alrdy beat you anywayz
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Old 03-15-05, 12:54 AM   #10
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Voted For: Non Capisco

Non - you had some nice personals in there...good punches and flow...i liked ur closer the best...i guess whut u would work on would be vocab i guess...some good metas u had too... good spit

Evolution - ur shit was pretty dope too, good flow...some punches and personals but nuthin really stuck out to me...make ur punches hit harder...keep spittin

V/ Non Capisco

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Old 03-15-05, 10:12 AM   #11
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uppppity up up........drop a link if u want.........
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Old 03-15-05, 10:41 AM   #12
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Voted For: Non Capisco

V/Hugh Jass....this was a good battle hugh came wit creative an hard hittin punchs wit good structure an personals....Evolution u had a good verse also but i felt u didnt come as hard wit ur punchs it seemed like u came to lightly i seen better from u ....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=H
closer=Tie
Punchs=H
structure=Tie
personals=h
vocab=tie
Overall=Hugh Jass

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Old 03-15-05, 02:21 PM   #13
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Thx for the vote....... upp'n. this shit ..................
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Old 03-15-05, 02:43 PM   #14
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Voted For: Non Capisco

hugh gets this just

basically i didnt think this was a great battle

evo -

ur verse was weak ya punches were hella basic here and very boring and predictable, you can do beta so try harder next time

hugh -

again not great but you had some imagination to ur punches which is gud, vergin on bein slightly played with the first line but the way you worded it made it a gud ish punch....not bad but you can also do beta

overall - hugh took this quite easily

peace

hugh you wanna battle dawg? quik 6 lines while ur online? pm me or just set it up
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Old 03-15-05, 02:59 PM   #15
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Voted For: Evolution

lets see

non.....thought you had some nice stuff in there, your getting better man, but overall, your opener killed you, pretty played and weak, your closer was good, but evolution had better stuff....your structure, okay, i dunno about all those dots your using, kinda looks stupid, but your flow was good, no problem there, up your vocab a little, it was kinda low, wordplay was decent.....you didnt really have any personals in there, so try and get those in next time

evolution, pretty solid verse man, thought every bar hit pretty hard....this was a creative verse, not too complex, but it was effective, flow and structure were bang on....nothing special with vocab....wordplay was decent, so overall, you had harder punches, you had personals in your verse, and thats why your getting my vote......

v/evolution
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