^LOL.

The hook fits... the only part I didn't like was the word 'porch' it sounds off. Okay so I guess that's not the hook, just an intro. Not bad. Would prolly work better as a chorus. Something in your voice sounds off (with the tone). Overall, I like the vibe to the track, just sounds like something missing but at around 1 58 it picks up again. Just looking for some consistency. I like different, experimental tracks. Good luck with this.

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