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01-21-05, 10:04 AM | #1 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908516
your aim is off punk cuz your bullets just missed us when it comes 2 death there's no need 2 assist us we know when the time comes, you'll be bringin more heat no need 2 get excited kid, we're on the same street 2 feet got u 2 where u are today and 2 glocks shot u and now your body lays dug up in the dirt 6 feet under the ground im sinister with a silencer - killin sound your position's been filled, i got skills to fit the bill so ill, i don't need steel to empty any tills i spill raw emotions that spark mind over matter you best batter-up before your organs start to scatter for goodness sake, i caught u jumpin on my pump fake it's kinda late for teachin so im forced to demonstrate how to play in this game and keep your fuckin head straight visions of paradise, as your eyes begin to dilate and now you've been drafted, you'll learn that the fact is half of these rappers never showed up for practice and you cldn't reach my level once i mastered my speech everest got nothin on me if u wanna test my peak an avalanche of rhymes knocks the globe into oblivion leavin me to stand, one woman out of a million i control the orchestra, conductor of it's energy just try to hold me back when the mic is right in front me and suddenly, everything around turns against me allies multiply now converted into enemies quit tryin to play so brave no way to stay unscathed no matter what you say to this day i remain unphased i'm a rat in a maze stayin alive to be fed when your hangin by a thread most would put their hopes to bed but i'll survive, stayin alive with my grammar that got enough authority to throw you in the slammer cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills some cats say where theres a will there is a way but you'd better hope their wrong otherwise your gonna pay and now u've been rejected there aint nothin left but sorrow thats what u get for thinkin my words were there to borrow
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01-21-05, 10:19 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: CD98 49E3
AAAAAAGGGHHHH! This was killer
Honestly the best word - smashing. Im pretty much at a loss for words but il try and explain your greatness: Your vocab is always a high level. Your metaphors were fitted in so nicely and very cleverly. Tasty wordplay and multis. -Fucking heavy. The flow was cool, easily readable, the structure was cool too. I am a big fan of this piece. Much love to you girly, im glad we reppin the same crew. Lines that stood out: "and you cldn't reach my level once i mastered my speech everest got nothin on me if u wanna test my peak" "cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills" -Was obviously more but i didnt want to list all of them WE gotta hook up for a collab next week. Maybe mon or sun if you down?
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01-21-05, 12:06 PM | #3 | |||||||
Life is a Constant Battle
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great
IP: BBF6 96EE
good job i guess i can say fam...sorry for the beef while back but you know just crew battlin...your drop right here was pretty dope had ill multis and word play, good flow, good structure, and vocab...big ups and my favorite line was
"cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills" i give ya a 9 outta 10
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01-21-05, 12:28 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
thx fam fo da feed
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01-21-05, 07:07 PM | #5 | |||
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uppin please leave feedback people ill return da favor
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01-21-05, 10:13 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin..........
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01-21-05, 10:34 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 5671 DBDD
dope nice punches and disses not the best i seen from you but still good
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01-22-05, 12:31 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin..........
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01-22-05, 06:20 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
Nice Drop Queen I was feelin that one that shit was tight as fuck. overall a 9/10
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01-22-05, 10:35 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 9962 BE78
shit was off the hook no doubt, fire. Good Vocab but even better idea and flow. Great piece good drop. peace
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01-23-05, 08:37 AM | #11 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin on feedback
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01-23-05, 11:00 AM | #12 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 8C49 8920
Seen better from you but still...this was solid drop girl! Was definately feeling your flow, vocab n structure were straight to the point. Had mad hardhitting punches/disses in there, good wordplay, creative shit...
Keep on dropping...good read... DQ
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01-23-05, 03:58 PM | #13 | |||
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IP: 0825 899A
thx fo da feed DQ
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01-23-05, 06:41 PM | #14 | |||
Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 28AD 5545
damn ma dis was fiya right here.Im thinkin about nominating dis verse of yours cuz dats how hot it was...Wordplay was tite..Structure was easy to read..Flow was killa..Had nice punches prolly a lil to nice...da word for dis piece is BANGIN..fa reals..good job...
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01-23-05, 08:31 PM | #15 | ||||||||
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this whole joint was ill as hell but i especially like these lines chic you drop some crazy shit |
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