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07-05-02, 12:59 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"do Blacc Tears"
IP: ADEC 56AC
Do black tears fall from brown faces
and beautiful cocoa eyes? Can deep pain be disguised? Hear a word to the wise – there is no weakness in our cries; for only God knows how hard we fight and try, how we seriously strive, while constantly upholding bold links to our old pride; facing hidden foes from whom we cannot hide; reviving the broken pieces of our soul that dies when it is slain enduring psychic pain and then laid aside. Do black tears fall from brown faces onto moist cocoa skin? Do they feel like the same tears cried before now cried again? If I turn my wet face to the wind and grin will that somehow change the spin – cut loose of loss and capture win? The analysis and reasoning begin to wear thin, over time, in my mind. Do black tears fall from brown faces late at night, mostly hidden from common sight until the next day’s light pierces the secret veil and exposes a rejuvenated sorrow, longing for a brighter tomorrow? Or do black tears fall from brown faces tenderly kissed by the sun before the journey had begun in a sacred place where the salt of the earth wait for the season of rebirth? Do black tears fall? |
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07-05-02, 09:30 PM | #2 | ||||||
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i was really feelin dat. i was gonna put my fav. lines but there were too many to put (im lazy-sorry!) but fa real..keep it up. i wanna see more. 1
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07-06-02, 10:00 AM | #3 | ||||||
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hey synickle....this really was another very good piece....actually i would say a heavyweight piece for sure...superb depiction of emotions and it was like a rhetorical question piece to behold...(!!!!)...but for real...i was really feeling this....the depth to it was superb...and the imagery at times was very good...and of coure....very well executed....mucho respect.....
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