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05-18-05, 05:11 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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"A Disabled Fable"
IP: B887 BC3C
" A Disabled Fable" Born from my mother's womb, kicking and fighting my way from my natural tomb Into the light, blinding my sight....in my confusion hearing things from those in the night "Wow, look at his big legs"...hahaha..."Explains him kicking all the time, it was doing in my head" Even then, my limbs seemed vital to me, at such a young age, i have memories playin on the fields Football with my family, so them seems like a grain of normailty, reflecting now is saddening Running through the nights dressed in black so I blend as I depend on the dark In the parks, standing and listening to preachers as the move round talking of christs preachings Playing and earning respect, now without another, I'm an inatimate object, who people think might infect And wreck their young seeds, quite simply failing to see that disability is not a contageous disease Growing up as a child hoping to become a sports player to earn and survive my way through life That would be my fire exit from the ghetto strife, now i can only stare as everything passes me by I wonder why, in my brain im insane asking how the bible can be a book of subliminal lies Causing me to cry and look at disciple writings in contempt, conceit and despise Ive prayed and stayed faithful to thee, yet in a cruel accident you have taken everything from me Now in my sleep, is the only time I can realise dreams through closed and froze eyes Its the oppurtunity,My only portal I have, to escape the cage of disability in these wheels Im night imprisoned by steel, but by society and how it judges and preconcieves me Living with no legs, in my eyes is an evil fate, i would never debate, conversate, or wish on another person As it is a life filled with remorse, saddness and never-ending tears and internal hurting Tired of patronising comments of how life hasnt ended, and people pretending rights are equal Ask that same person to give you their legs, and watch them laugh and say "I'd rather be dead" Because this world is superficial, I wont knock it because thats the world is, no point fighting But in a world like this im easily oversighted, turned away because people are misinformed and frightened Thats my pain, fuck being comfortable with who I am, I just want to be normal again So I can run in the rain, and free my heart of this relentelss onslaught of debaught grief and strain
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05-18-05, 05:18 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 4208 F86D
Ha, this was nice. Great vocab. It was more like an story telling/ poem. The emotion was nice, felt the character's feeling. The imaginary was good, i can picture the hard times the character has been through. Yo and your wordplay is mad fucking dope, very creative. But The twist at the end was very mysterious, "Living with no legs, in my eyes is an evil fate, i would never debate, conversate, or wish on another person". I was like "WTF" Did on the first sentence did the man said "Look at his cute legs", but now the man dont have no legs?........That's fucked up, but i felt the pain.
Nice drop man Please return a fav leave a feedback in my newest OM "Silent Scream"......... Chea.
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05-20-05, 06:48 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 3FC4 D8E8
Thanks 4 da feed ...the speech at the beginning is from those surrounding him at birth...BUMP
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