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MR. ZACHY DOOM | 5 | 71.43% | |
Invader_ZIM | 2 | 28.57% | |
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08-23-04, 10:21 PM | #14 | ||
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Voted For: MR. ZACHY DOOM
I give this one to Zachy doomstar wateva it is, Altho the structure could use a little work, but the verse was good stuff. I cudnt see anythin as far as personals go, but Zzchy had much better wordplay, I've shot a couple people But only with a camera's eye that line was the best in the battle. I dont actually know where to start with Zimmo's verse I can see where you were trying to go but there was just too much basic rhyming and the structure just throws you off straight away, but all i can say is improve your structure and elevate |
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