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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-11-05 at 08:44 PM

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Scary Thawghtz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-05 09:46 PM.

This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse...
They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon
You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude
Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes!
Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move..
This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes
Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game
Cause its going no where, except down the Drain
Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits
And...
Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets..

haha 5 minutes key'd didn't feel like writin

AutoMatik has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 10:56 AM.

I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught....
You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...(nameplay)
Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack....
But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!.....
After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said....
Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!...
Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way.....
Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!...
As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out.....
Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!.....

sorry it was quick but i gotta go...this should be enuff for the win...~1~

Voted For: AutoMatik

-This is an LFS Review-

Scary Thawghtz

This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse...

Just to let you know this didn't rhyme...or make sense....

They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon
You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude

What?!? I'm lost lol

Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes!
Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move..

Whack

This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes
Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game

Didn't rhyme...again...and it sucked

Cause its going no where, except down the Drain
Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits

Once again...that sucked

Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets..

Are you gonna finish that bar?

Onto the next verse...let's venture

AutoMatik

I Make You Bleed In Cry Of Ya Livin Soul That I Caught....
You Winning This Battle Is The Only Time I Get Scary Thawghtz...(

Decent...and thats a stretch

Your Wack And Theres No Explaintion For Why Ur So Wack....
But If Your A Alias,I See The Reason You Came Back!.....

Umm no

After This Battle You Betta Quote What I Said....
Cuz You Hold No Heat...when Your Hold PENCIL LEAD!!...

Didnt get it

Heres A Lost To Get Ya On Ya Way.....
Ur So Wack,Ya Skill Don't Even Look MY WAY!...

Are you sucking on purpose?

As You See I Didn't Try,It Was A Quicky I Layed out.....
Watch You Get K.O'ed Like Nas Riped Jigga Out!!.....
Played...you didnt even use it good

[u]Overall:[/]u This battle sucked...pretty bad...oh well Auto gets my vote cuz he made more sese...but both verse sucked....rtf on anythin in my sig....and elevate...for the sake of humanity....

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^lol...yeah of course i didn't try...lol...dis is me when my powers about to go off..and i don't want to lose....loll

This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse...
They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon

^^ its called a 3 line Text Bar.. U dum fucks

This bitch is wack, Jus admit it cause its true soon
Ill put so many sparks tah your verse...
They'll come up with a New Blue Mooon
ONE BAR ^^
You dun throw punches, buh go head start tah fight dude
Cause..Im so Cold, you can say i have a heart of ice cubes!
TWO BAR^^
Knockin yah lights out, You can't Bare tah Move..
This Kid wouldn't have 2 Souls..If he had a Pair of Shoes
THREE BAR^^
Im droppin weights on your verse jus tah pound your game
Cause its going no where, except down the Drain
FOUR BAR^^
Your punches are missin me, Its Dumber Tah Take hits
And...
Ill put u in so much blackless, u'll hide under the Blankets..
FIVE BAR^^

Jus for you dum ppl..

Voted For: AutoMatik

voted for auto

Auto ya punches were very creative and hard hittin i was like whoah on every line
ya personals were creative as well ya flow was on the point like mad man. The strucutre was good n easy to keep with ya wordplay was also creative

nice verse

Scary ya came a lil basic in ya verse nothing really stuck out. ya punches were allover the place. didnt see any personals so u need to elevate on that. multies get them in ur verse elevate on those. ya flow was the only thing i seen that i liked, ya structure was choppy as well.

both elevate on multies

auto gets it to more hard punches an personals

v/Auto

BE SURE TO RTF
battle link in sig

um i never heard of a three line bar...and I didnt take off for that...yur verse sucked lol....

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lol...haha...buh when i peeped ur verse... it was jus....blah.... anyways no biggie cuz i key'd tha in like 3 minutes cuz i was tired.. and my time was up

fine wutever...I try to help and have fun but someone has to fuck it up...wutever set up a battle if its that bad lol....whatever

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Voted For: Scary Thawghtz

Alright, let's see.

Punches: Scary
Personals: Auto...he had one lame one.
Opener: Tie, both only somewhat decent.
Closer: Meh...Scary
Flow: Scary

That's about as far as I'm going to go, except for saying one more thing...Auto kept repeating the same word and it got annoying. 'You're wack and no reason you're wack', layed and jigga don't rhyme, so the closer isn't a multi...he rhymed way and way...that just ruined his verse.

Vote: Scary



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