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this is a radio ready track?...tell a nigga plz...if u can hear dis on the radio..thank u...


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223731
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223467

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Yea this would be radio worthy, I don't see why not. You have talent man, you aint wack or anything it's not like wow this kid is so horrible. People will actually listen to it so yea.

Well for the track, I thought you did good. Your flow was pretty good and your lyrics were pretty good through out the song. The delivery and emotion was contructed very well. your adlibs were straight gay and that was basically the only downer on the song. If you just woulda let Wes sing and not have these gay adlibs it woulda been better. And as well J Wes did a good job, nice singing voice for a guy.

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i could see this shit on the pop charts... thats bank... money on my mind baby

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if the beat was a lil bit better and your quality was studio quality then well yes this would be

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TheMyspace

it was koo....but u know what IM gonna do...imma Do it for you....not to say nuttin bad about ur flow or anything but...other pepople Can rock it better.....but u did a Good job its probably just not the right vibe for u tho (dont take this personal.....or take it as me haten on u aight?)

keep tryn n keep elevating

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yerrr i can see this on the radio or sumthin definetely. its a nice little club track yo. im feelin the beat alot.. that hooks real dope aswell yo, that guy's got a nice voice...ya flows decent on this, and ya emotion's defo' on par..ya voice really suits this kind of track. yerrr decent track, im feelin this

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I DOne A Version To THis..........

Your Qual Seems A lil Worse than normal

Verse 1:
FLows Ncie,feeling your eelviery,suits it,vocals seem a lil low or maybe jus my shitty speakers lol,Feeling it,i love your emotion,Good switch up

Hooks dope,well what can you expect

V2:
Same As First Really,Exept I Like The Lyrics Better Here

V3:
Yeah,lol *Head bangs*
Is This The Jazz Version,I Lost Track Of How Many Verses You Got Lmao

SHits Nioce!,Lol

Just Upp The Wual And The Vol And its Ready For The Radio

:P

Good Shhhiit!
Overall:8/10

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