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3-0 K.O , 4-1 K.O, First to 5 votes


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Check in by: 11-21-05 at 01:33 AM

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Closed - 3-0 KO

Flow Intelligent has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-05 01:37 AM.

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-05 02:04 AM.

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo

2 songs, split personality and 2 sides of something or other, enjoi, good luck if you don't get the punches....your wack

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Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros

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dope shit intel inside, uppin for the first amound of votes

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uppin for votes yo................................

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Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
^^decent opener
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
^^good flow ok punch
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
^^eh.ok
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
^^i liked this....decent
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
^^lol,....koo
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
^^good closer.......

consistent verse, nothing spectacular but it was sloid throughout most of it.........good shit

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
^^wasnt feeling this at all
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
^^ok, but way to simple
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
^^wack
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
^^wack
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
^^nope, really bad concept yo
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
^^why, like i got it but it was wack

i wasnt feelin any of your verse, your punches lacked
creativity n exacution....terrible verse man, no hate but try
to elevate alot b4 you take on cats that use metas n wordplay in each of their bars..pc

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

uppin this shit for some damn votes......................

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Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
^^^Ight opener
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
^^^No
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
^^^Ight.....worded wrong
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
^^^No
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
^^^Good
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
^^^Ight closer

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
^^^good opener
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
^^^Nice
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
^^^Good
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
^^^GOod
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
^^^Nice
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
^^^Good CLoser
THis was a good battle....but flow came wit a consistent verse that had better punchs an flow....all around better verse...black u had some good lines but some played work on thats V/Flow Intelligent

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Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
....1st line was somewhat decent,2nd line was shit
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
....Nah,didn't connect
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
...Doesn't rhyme
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
...Unless I'm readin it wrong,..you said his flow's tighter?
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
...Good
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
...Nope.

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
...Good
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
...Nah,played
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
...Good
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
....Decent
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
....Good
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
...Played

One-sided battle here.
Flow Intelligent won..

Blackmage,all of your punches were lacking,with the exception of the vacation line.And you even complimented him in ya verse.You said his flow's tigher..And that's bad..so,yea..

Vote-Flow Intel.

Voted For: Blackmage

Blackmage

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
Not a punch..
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
Nah.. Way to forced..
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
Not a punch.. just a statement..
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
Concept had potential, but it was worded wrong..
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
Not a punch..
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
This kind of nameplay is played against Flow Intelligent..

Flow Intelligent

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
Pretty good..
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
Concept is pretty played..
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
This is really played..
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
Decent..
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
Nah.. I get it, but it just seems a little far out..
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
Simple.. but decent..

Conclusion

This battle wasn't that close. Blackmage had a lot of statements, and in his whole verse there wasn't a quotable. His lines seemed to be either played or not punches at all. Flow Intelligent had a few played lines, but a few decent ones as well. Almost all of his lines were punches, which alone takes my vote. But, on top of that, some of his punches were actually pretty good. Flow Intelligent had the better overall verse.

Vote - Flow Intelligent

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