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Old 12-12-04, 04:47 PM   #241
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It was like, a good concept, but too many "s and worded very poorly, maybe you should drop the battle with me.
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Old 12-12-04, 04:51 PM   #242
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It was like, a good concept, but too many "s and worded very poorly, maybe you should drop the battle with me.

lol aiight, blah... I jus might do that for the fun of it. your verse too? lol
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Old 12-12-04, 04:54 PM   #243
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Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peeped yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick
I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity


blah, lookin' at it now, I don't like it much, and I'm not so sure I won as I was, and battle could have gone either way, but meh....
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Old 12-12-04, 04:55 PM   #244
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~Sonofisis~:
9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes
Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines!
lol, personal
You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You
Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews
fakkkkkkkkkeeeeee=whaaaaaaccccckkkk
In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad
Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass
iight
So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes
Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope"
never use a dope line in my presence
This is too much of an Easy Job
Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God
whack ass non punchin shit
Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck
I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch
this is horrible


9th Degree:
My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies
I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades
no
So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head
Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed
lol
That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow
Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row
ehhhh?
If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed
But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp
lmaofoalmaofoalmao....word
Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown
Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down
hahahaha......no -_-
You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested
But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested
good concept, poorly used

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Old 12-12-04, 05:02 PM   #245
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Prolly a verse full of bitin' shit, and really not much more
...Yea, I DO bite... but only at Empire's store
fuckin mind readers
Your verse is so "soft", like it was "sealy" lit
Peeped yo last verse, now who's the one who really bit?
fakkkkkkkkkkkkerrrrrrrr
Why use a ghostwriter, cuz ain't nobody here better than me
Fashos not you, compared to my "A", you're a letter "D"
does this make sense?
Man, look at yo verse, you're "ass", you only spit "shit"
the only way you get yo wins, is wit yo newb-infested dick

I merked yo ass up, but you opened it up again
Pullin' a JT, "Cry Me a River", is yo only way to win
no
Say I like to joke? I guess for you I'll boast love
You wanna see a joke?... Then look at the post above
fuckin aye way too easy of a diss
Got a "watermelon" for a head, and no brain, don't be deceived
Yea, you can spit good.... but only when usin' seeds
ehhhhhh
You're a "pedofile", you'll rape that kid, to see us lose
But yo rhymes are more misleadin' than yo stash of "Jesus Juice"
lol
To butt sex you are open, like the shirt of the lil kid
What you got a crush on me? Got my name repped in yo sig
no
You're also fuckin' fat, ears big, nose jus like Nomar
Fuck Phantom of the Opera, you're the Shadow of the Oprah
lmafolmalfolmaofo
Better rumble back to the jungle, he look like a chimpansee
Like windows on limousines... me~him~can't~see
hell no
He takes his "lil friend" and runs, cuz he knos that I shook them
Cuz his verse blows more times, than a hoe living in Brooklyn
could you have come more played
We all kno you're a pussy, you're 1/4 my skill, only a quarter
When I come, you hold up more "flags", than the U.S.A boarder
coo
Oh, no! It's Phantom on E-looch's dick. Shit, I better run!!!
Scrap that, it's only fruit head and V-Ice wit a water gun
lttle chuckle
Go to witness protection, you pussy. Change yo name jus like Calamity
Have you behind a "Bush"... like yo name was Sean Hannity
fuck no

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Old 12-12-04, 05:04 PM   #246
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^lol aiight, yea, that's pretty good evaluation. weerd, thanks I guess. lol
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Old 07-11-05, 11:54 PM   #247
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Word to upping this thread, rate my super quick keyed verse to Trooper.

Sir-pies (suprised) you fit in anything, fucking chubby toad
You'd rip me style? pshh... maybe if ya got in my wardrobe
Elastics as bracelets, shoe's with no lases, this cows poor? NO SHIT!
I'd say the grass is greener on the other side...
BUT, troop ate all of it!
C'mon mista pimp, aint been with the ladies, we know what your about
Last time a girl opened her window of oportunity...
It was to kick you out!
Make threads about "game" ROFL!!, your fat, and poor to
So it's safe to say your win won't workout.. kinda like you
I'm cold hearted like jack frost, your saggy tits... you drop soft
And.. this guy dosn't have gizzly lines, but he'll still bear a loss
People predicted you'd win? Duke, I aint one to be trifled
So ya, even I would pick you!............. Out with my rifle
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Old 07-12-05, 12:07 AM   #248
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I dont mind hard critiscisam cuz im used to it from the cats that helped me elevate so feel free to go hard on me like your mother did.
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Old 07-12-05, 02:31 PM   #249
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GO HARD ON ME LIKE YOUR MOTHER DID... sheesh
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Old 07-13-05, 09:35 PM   #250
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they were all garbage
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Old 07-13-05, 09:39 PM   #251
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lol, lolololololololol, that was fucking classic, even if it wasn't really meant to be funny, that shit was ownage, , god I set myself up for that one.
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Old 07-13-05, 09:43 PM   #252
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but they were all garbage though, you were right, well some played, the grass is greener line was coo though, and the won't workout line, but anyways since you won't, i'll breakdown the verse myself.. *mumbles* asshole
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Sir-pies (suprised) you fit in anything, fucking chubby toad
You'd rip me style? pshh... maybe if ya got in my wardrobe
plizayed
Elastics as bracelets, shoe's with no lases, this cows poor? NO SHIT!
I'd say the grass is greener on the other side...
BUT, troop ate all of it!
decent concept but I coulda worded it better, no that good
C'mon mista pimp, aint been with the ladies, we know what your about
Last time a girl opened her window of oportunity...
It was to kick you out!
played as fuck
Make threads about "game" ROFL!!, your fat, and poor to
So it's safe to say your win won't workout.. kinda like you
decent punch but shitty wording, coulda been dope
I'm cold hearted like jack frost, your saggy tits... you drop soft
And.. this guy dosn't have gizzly lines, but he'll still bear a loss
played again
People predicted you'd win? Duke, I aint one to be trifled
So ya, even I would pick you!............. Out with my rifle
meh, wack

Werd to your hard mother.
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