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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 12-23-05 at 09:03 PM

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 08:45 PM.

Who the f........
Keystyle for this herb.


Your a joke, so you know what i'd do if i wanted a laugh?
Id scroll my mouse to your name..and check ya battle stats!!
Im fresh and ill, but your techniques best dead
you even chill in a crew full of weak text heads
so thats prolly why you cant elevate or come close to me
i mean the last time you came within a foot..you got cold feet
i can tell you arent a gangster mate, so fuck tests
cause loggin into RV is the only time you touch techs
but still, you aint got a bad name..but me, i murder dudes
cause seriousely..none of RV has ever even heard of you
now your losing too,hit you so you turn black and blue
cause i hate ya technique.........and i hate YOU too
your fakin dude, your a faggot if i ever saw one
but ye skill faggets to show..
..prolly why i never saw none
I cant catch this man, look..we cant stop him now
I'l make his ego will drop so far...
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...its still dropping now!

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you gonna accept eh...................................

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Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 08:51 PM.

I'm grilling daubs I'll stab ya rhymes like forks
You can't call urself a vet when your the biggest dork
ya score don't mean shit cuz ur verses are all prewrite
and your that into eminem you probably ride on his dick
I hate it when u babble So I'ma destroy u in a battle
I best finish u here and send this wannbe emcee packin
You ain't going no where bitch why don't u consider actin
bitch ur just gettin tired out when I wear u down like a saddle
You talk out ur asshole so your mouth might aswell be one
I hope you die on this earth soon it'll be better when ur gone
You hated me from day one cuz your rided mad dogs nuts
and I don't give a fuck bitch cuz the truth is u both suck
I think you need to grow up and quit ur little fuckin dreams
cuz i'll melt you up bitch and turn your ass into cream
I wanna see u scream I'll chop you up into little peaces
and throw them into the sea so no1 catches ur deseases

lol.


I ko'ed you .

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lol sure you did I'm just letting people know that when i posted my verse up the words are all jumbled for some reason. When I posted it some of my lines were placed earlier in the verse. Don't ask why that happend.

checkin pollz

upping for some votes here.............................................. ..

upping for some votes plz............................................... ..

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs - You had a good flow, you used good punches lines, and wordplay.

Best Line - Your a joke, so you know what i'd do if i wanted a laugh?
Id scroll my mouse to your name..and check ya battle stats!!

Worst Line - so thats prolly why you cant elevate or come close to me
i mean the last time you came within a foot..you got cold feet

Tech - Your verse was pretty weak, it flowed ok, but your punches where bad.

Best Line - I wanna see u scream I'll chop you up into little peaces
and throw them into the sea so no1 catches ur deseases

Worst Line - ya score don't mean shit cuz ur verses are all prewrite
and your that into eminem you probably ride on his dick

OVERALL - This battle was one sided, Daubs gets the win. He had the better flow, his punches where hitten harder and overall just whored this kat. Tech your flow was ok but your punchlines where weak, and you didnt have any wordplay at all.

Vote - Daubs

RTF in SIG!

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Me and Daubs are in the same crew.. so whatever.

I'll just check the polls..

Voted For: Daubs

Technique - You came to generic in this battle. Your basic rhyme scheme only works when you can deliver hard hitting and funny punches. You failed to do so, nothing stood out to me and a lot of the shit was newbish and some shit I've seen done so many times before. No real creativity involved and it just seems like a quick key with no effort. You need to increase the power of your personals and punches, work on wording them right and using the right concepts and shit.

OVERALL: 4/10


Daubs - Really, I can tell this was a quick key but you still had a couple of nice lines. I liked the closer, it is similar to something I've done before. A few lines that were real childish like the "I hate ya technique, and i hate YOU too" .....that line was fucking corny as hell. Still, you had a few nice punches, most were just average but you did have a couple that were a bit better. Keep elevating, your concepts are cool, you just need to work on the wording of some and how and when to use the 3-line style because sometimes you tend to over do it.

OVERALL: 5.5/10

Return the favour on my battle against some herb who likes to overly force his wordplay. The link is in my siggy!!

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