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07-11-05, 02:24 AM
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Dizzee Rascal vs. Artik Phrost
IP: 6EB9 28C9
8 Lines Minimum
Decide on the exact amount in your check ins. Checks Ins due Wednesday Verses due Friday (All times are eastern) Go read the rules thread if you don't know them. Come dope.. |
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07-11-05, 06:23 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
O fuk!!!!
ahahah wassup gurl Dont forget i only get the 1 alias on here so no name droppin ight goodluck how about 12 lines or 18? |
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07-11-05, 07:28 AM
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#3
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IP: 828D 0B7A
- If u dont fully get these cus theres alot of metas then plz dnt vote
Think who u dissing cus how i compose ur form u think its particulate Punches? u missing, period so only time frost hears artik-u-late/articulate Ffrosts suprised ur downfall make ur coffin rise as the nails convect Slam ya intestines so we see artik 'wind blows' yet cant 'hail' respect Aint far-to-kill cus my fist divides ya organism numerate ya particle Dont need to write a statement about wack but still giving artik-L/article So u departing ill? in the jaws of a clock this time it crunches Bitch ill leave u 'dis-missed' like im joking about ur punches Cus ur jaw bunches today bedazzled by pain u dont no wot to say Herb ur 'syles in more jepordary' than alex trabec 'switchin toupae' * So we know u missed cudnt even process text if ya were a printer How frost even exist? its summer now bitch come bak in the winter *Every1 clowing on her style apparntly |
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07-11-05, 11:10 AM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
Aww...No Name Droppin?....Why?....
Maybe I Will...Maybe I Wont.. i'll match
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::.. .Re-Writing The Re-Run.  |
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07-15-05, 11:50 AM
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#5
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
bOY...yu lucky i dont lyke to no show....i didnt get round to writing til 2 this morning......
Dizzee Rascal, ..........This Homo Got More Aliases Than God Himself.... ................Welcome To My World.. yo, . ......I Promise I Wont Drop Ya Aliases...But If Ya'll Wanna Know...PM Me And I'll Will Tell . yo, ...My Logic's Surpasses Ya Wits..Jugganaut Flows Smash Ya To Bits, So, We Take 'Dizzee To The Head'?..... .................................................. ....Yeah, After Somebody 'Slashes Thier Wrists'!!.. [ight, i just wanted to key lyke that...one tyme...BACK TO BISNESS] ...I'll Admit; Ya Verse Was A Tad Surprising..I See Dizzee On An Uprising But Touch Wit Artik's Writings??...Shit, Punches'll 'Put A D. To The Wall' Like 'Placing Advertising'!!.. ...Ya Dont Have Balls, Ya Weak..Shots Break The Outter Layer Make Ya Ball An' Bleed!!.. AP Have Ya Sprawled From Heat, Cuz At The 'Site My Punches First Land'..It'll Leave 'Cal-On-Knees'!!..(colonies) ...Yu've Yet To Break The Surface Of This Dame's Wits..Yu Cant MainTain Hits Yu Not Hearing Me?..I'll Pull Ya 'Voicebox Thru Ya Lids' tiL Ya 'See Whats Being Said' Lyke 'Sign Language'!!.. ...I Dont Need To Give Ya Aliases For Personals...Cuz, Sonny I Know Ya!!.. <Yu Adore Me> So, I'll 'Shove My Shoes In Ya Deep Sleep'..So Diz Can 'Chase His Dreams...Into A Coma'!!.. ...Bleed Ya Neck!..Ya 'Artillery Is Fabricated'..So Nobody 'Believes Yur Techs/text'!!.. So Why Should I even Stress?..I'll 'Put Pie In Yur Window Of Opprotunity'; Cuz In This Duel..Thats Yur Onli 'Sweet Success'!!.. . ..(.W.H.O.R.E.D.)..
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::.. .Re-Writing The Re-Run. |
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07-15-05, 12:28 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
tight drop gurl wanna post this on HH wot ever it called
lets get some votes |
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07-15-05, 03:14 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Think who u dissing cus how i compose ur form u think its particulate
Punches? u missing, period so only time frost hears artik-u-late/articulate So u departing ill? in the jaws of a clock this time it crunches Bitch ill leave u 'dis-missed' like im joking about ur punches Vs ...Ya Dont Have Balls, Ya Weak..Shots Break The Outter Layer Make Ya Ball An' Bleed!!.. AP Have Ya Sprawled From Heat, Cuz At The 'Site My Punches First Land'..It'll Leave 'Cal-On-Knees'!!..(colonies) v/ D.R.
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..The Council..
7 Day Theory |
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07-15-05, 08:26 PM
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(TeamOne)
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IP: 354F E428
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wow... hahahahah... at least he admits it... anyways... Ffrosts suprised ur downfall make ur coffin rise as the nails convect Slam ya intestines so we see artik 'wind blows' yet cant 'hail' respect Aint far-to-kill cus my fist divides ya organism numerate ya particle Dont need to write a statement about wack but still giving artik-L/article So u departing ill? in the jaws of a clock this time it crunches Bitch ill leave u 'dis-missed' like im joking about ur punches<<< LMAO!!!! vs. nothing... Artik- tip, elevate just a [i]tad[/b] bit... some of ur lines are like "yeah, its wordplay, but it doesnt really connect at all..." you cant call it wordplay just because two words have the same concept...u cant be like "i'll "smack ur grin".................................................. ......................... ....................................so you can say my punches "broke ur teeth"!!!" its not really that good... that sweet success line could have been a lot better if tha window of opportunity part wasnt so stretched... |
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07-15-05, 08:52 PM
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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: ECB3 36A0
i might take time to read this battle... if artik's verse wasn't so annoying. :/
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07-15-05, 09:07 PM
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#10
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(TeamOne)
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IP: 354F E428
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omg!!! HELL YEAH!!! her verse is all ova tha place... its one thing to be original but DAMN! |
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07-15-05, 09:10 PM
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IP: 258C A279
^Admit what fool...
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..The Council..
7 Day Theory |
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07-16-05, 09:34 AM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
So whats that then 2-0 ??
Yeh but doubting artiks verse, taking credit away from mine  lol |
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07-16-05, 11:02 AM
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the medicine man
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IP: 8B7B DE28
Cus ur jaw bunches today bedazzled by pain u dont no wot to say
Herb ur 'syles in more jepordary' than alex trabec 'switchin toupae' * So we know u missed cudnt even process text if ya were a printer How frost even exist? its summer now bitch come bak in the winter vs ...I Dont Need To Give Ya Aliases For Personals...Cuz, Sonny I Know Ya!!.. <Yu Adore Me> So, I'll 'Shove My Shoes In Ya Deep Sleep'..So Diz Can 'Chase His Dreams...Into A Coma'!!.. ...Bleed Ya Neck!..Ya 'Artillery Is Fabricated'..So Nobody 'Believes Yur Techs/text'!!.. So Why Should I even Stress?..I'll 'Put Pie In Yur Window Of Opprotunity'; Cuz In This Duel..Thats Yur Onli 'Sweet Success'!!.. i actually read ya whole verse artik.....some of it is nice this battle was pretty close but dizze took it with that closer artik i know struc isnt that important but if u fix urs more people will read ya stuff |
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07-16-05, 11:47 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: ABC3 055A
both had punches in there.
both came good with sum wordplay and metaphors and shit... evenly matched all the way through, dizz had a better closer i think and also....when it comes down to it dizzee's was a better verse cuz at least you can read it fluently and not get pissed off cuz of the way it looks, i know structure aint important but when it affects the whole flow of ya verse it is V/ - Dizzee Rascal
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07-16-05, 12:01 PM
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+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
i refuse to change my structure....ya'll take one route...i take another....and Doc...explain how my wordplay wasnt connected...cuz that example, wasnt even wordplay..... i key a certain way, a more complex way....not lyke yall....yall just gonna have accept that or dont vote on my battles...
good verse, dizzee...we will see the results at RF on this....
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::.. .Re-Writing The Re-Run. |
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