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01-26-04, 04:09 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Avalonious vs. Auspicious
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01-26-04, 07:44 PM | #2 | ||||
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...093#post1134093
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...104#post1134104
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01-26-04, 10:06 PM | #3 | ||||
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01-26-04, 10:50 PM | #4 | ||||
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T- minus... 10...
9... 8... 7... 6... 5... 4... 3... 2... 1... Rape... merk, wits, Av's a biter, name change.. gay words n stuff, blurt, bitch, Aus is tighter.., should sum ya lame verse up... but look, you're wack... that's all... n fuck it I won't persist, Av'll make you cry ya i's out till Ausp_c_ous no longer exists... duke you're feminine... but look a here he fought to no avail, only problem is... while doin so... bitch slipped n broke a nail... and you're fuckin garbage kid... it's sad n' suicide time, cus the first time he made the cut...... he left a note behind... while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer, n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here... and it's an illusion... you will win this bout with lines... played, if the decisions mine I choose grave, now jump to conclusions... you did have skills... fuck it... really... I aint even hatin man, but there's enough dust on ya ass... to create the human race again... bitches aren't prone to battle... please Verb'll rattle with steel, cause pumps came with my shotty... your's included high heels... and right now all triple L battlers should listen, Auspicious proves you don't need comp... to hold a competition... I only mention audios now... didn't really wanna diss em, but one question... it take long to change ya studio, back to the kitchen..? VOTE: Thug Whyte... Verbal for PRESIDENT... (watch him turn something I said in this thread into a punch... LMAO... comedy...)
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01-27-04, 01:43 AM | #5 | ||||||
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who wants to kick me.......- Villin
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01-27-04, 04:58 PM | #6 | |||||
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scrolls for 2-3 minutes.. finds verse.. takes another 5 to see him vote for me.. then types..
Now im not a comical guy, but av's got me laughin at shit I admit, i used to think av was dope..... back when he bit but shit, i thought you ripped spits? now whats with this? back on business,i leave Kent with what he checked in with stretchin his stink hoe, hes starin at me but wont blink tho We all know Kent aint good, but we like to let him think so hoe.. Avalon serves no purpose to work with, hes worthless thats kinda like flaming IRS agents playing clowns at a circus I aint perfect, porcelian portraits could force it Av would not be stable, if 13ths dick wasn't there to support him but hey, im supportive. leave him red.. but i cant stand bulls truth be told, if he held grudges, Av would have his hands full say im on sum stupid shit. (.....................)put your excuses in If some1 gave Kent a vote he wouldn't know what to do with it a useless bitch.. now self acclaimed whore. More than before i told him 'elevation is key', but he inserted it into the wrong door good lord, Av cant score, someone tell him to please believe it hes got this win like his sig...................... he just cant see it ! ya not needed.. ya verse what pale, blah, ehh and corny Quote:
nah dawg.. your verse pretty much sumed that up for me Last edited by Auspicious : 01-27-04 at 05:02 PM. Reason: spelling errors |
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01-27-04, 08:07 PM | #7 | ||||
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ILL as fuck battle,, alot of people are interested in the evolve vs feeble match but this one is very ill also,,,
av came with a tight opener some decent punches and a funny as hell closer the yoohoo line was nice.... Aus came with the flow,, it was dead on point and had some good punches in there too such as the 'checked in with' line. overall a dope verse It seems Av didnt really try to me coz i've seen so much better from him before.. and Aus just seemed to have the better overall verse.. it seemed he tried for it more and it showed so vote auspicious |
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01-27-04, 08:13 PM | #8 | ||||||
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merk, wits, Av's a biter, name change.. gay words n stuff, blurt, bitch, Aus is tighter.., should sum ya lame verse up... 5/10....not hard hitting but look, you're wack... that's all... n fuck it I won't persist, Av'll make you cry ya i's out till Ausp_c_ous no longer exists... 7/10....lol, nice duke you're feminine... but look a here he fought to no avail, only problem is... while doin so... bitch slipped n broke a nail... 6/10....not bad, nothin new and you're fuckin garbage kid... it's sad n' suicide time, cus the first time he made the cut...... he left a note behind... 7/10....dope while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer, n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here... 7/10...haha, nice worplay and it's an illusion... you will win this bout with lines... played, if the decisions mine I choose grave, now jump to conclusions... 5/10...I get it, not great you did have skills... fuck it... really... I aint even hatin man, but there's enough dust on ya ass... to create the human race again... 5/10...wasnt feelin it bitches aren't prone to battle... please Verb'll rattle with steel, cause pumps came with my shotty... your's included high heels... 5/10....kinda played and right now all triple L battlers should listen, Auspicious proves you don't need comp... to hold a competition... 5/10.....ok I only mention audios now... didn't really wanna diss em, but one question... it take long to change ya studio, back to the kitchen..? 6/10.....decent finisher 58/100=58% Aus Now im not a comical guy, but av's got me laughin at shit I admit, i used to think av was dope..... back when he bit 7/10....nice personal but shit, i thought you ripped spits? now whats with this? back on business,i leave Kent with what he checked in with 7/10....yeahp stretchin his stink hoe, hes starin at me but wont blink tho We all know Kent aint good, but we like to let him think so 4/10.....nope hoe.. Avalon serves no purpose to work with, hes worthless thats kinda like flaming IRS agents playing clowns at a circus 3/10....never I aint perfect, porcelian portraits could force it Av would not be stable, if 13ths dick wasn't there to support him 5/10....better wording would have helped but hey, im supportive. leave him red.. but i cant stand bulls truth be told, if he held grudges, Av would have his hands full 5/10...not really a punch say im on sum stupid shit. (.....................)put your excuses in If some1 gave Kent a vote he wouldn't know what to do with it 5/10....meh a useless bitch.. now self acclaimed whore. More than before i told him 'elevation is key', but he inserted it into the wrong door 7/10.....dope good lord, Av cant score, someone tell him to please believe it hes got this win like his sig...................... he just cant see it ! 6/10....decent ya not needed.. ya verse what pale, blah, ehh and corny Quote: Originally posted by Verbal Kent (watch him turn something I said in this thread into a punch...) nah dawg.. your verse pretty much sumed that up for me 7/10.....good finisher 56/100=56% Close as shit, both had some tight lines and some looser I havent seen Aus battle in a while, he did better than I thought he would but more consistency from the usual suspect Vote - Av |
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01-27-04, 11:51 PM | #9 | |||
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Well...Av:::
Your verse was...good Well...Aus::: Your verse was...good But! Aus' closer killed the countdown.... But Av's opener killed the other opener...or is that the other way around.... Man...wait, are you sure they're both not Av...I mean..all those aliases? J/p: Really though: Av...your verse got broke down pretty well by Walter, I don't understand why your lines go from make me laugh to make me cry....it's like reading a soap opera.... Aus...pretty solid, but lots of your lines could have been worded into actual punches you were more or less just making statments in my opinion (not every line).... Liked: -while I'm at it you should fear... bullets'll fly through this queer, n' fuck Hershey drinks... cause faggot it'll be YooHoo dies here...- -And Aus' closer the most- I'm pretty sure you can both do better Overall...Av's punches came stronger throughout...Aus had a nice drop but like I said... lots of it seemed like it could have been worded just a little better Vote: Av |
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01-28-04, 01:47 AM | #10 | |||||||||||
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Honestly I Think You Both Couldve Done Much Better...Av Had Good Punches Here And There And Aus Was The Same...Only Difference Was Av Had A Few Old Concepts In His Verse...
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^Dope Nice Wordplay...Took Me A Second To See What You Meant Though..LoL Quote:
^2nd Line Was Funny And Witty..Nice Quote:
^2nd Line Was Good Quote:
^True, LoL And Aus Had A Tight Closer.. Opener - Tie...I Expected Aus' Punches - Tie Personals - Tie Wordplay - Av Closer - Aus Vocab - Av Vote - Av....Av Started Off Fine Then Towards The End Slacked....But Aus Had A Few Good Lines His First Few And His Last Few In His Verse....The Middle Of His Verse Was Lacking With HARD Punches.... |
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01-28-04, 09:24 AM | #11 | |||||
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Classic...
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01-28-04, 10:41 AM | #12 | |||||||
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This battle was really fuckin good...
Much respect and props to both skilled writers. But when my vote drops, it drops for Av. Both came spittin wit, used personals and wordplay effectively... But I feel Av rolled his shit together and produced hard punches... Aus produced the funnier shit. So, real close, but Av takes this with aggression. Peace
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01-28-04, 11:15 AM | #13 | ||||
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This Was A Good Battle...Good To See LLL Battles Becoming Dope Again.
Aus, You Had Some Decent Lines In Your Verse, But Then Some Really Weak Lines Aswell. You Would Have Won It If You Carried Your Consistancy Right The Way Through, You Fell Off Towards The End. Av, Good Punches Throughout Your Verse, Kept Your Consistancy Throughout Your Verse. Pretty Faultless. Some Lines Werent All That Hard Hitting, But Enough To Make You Edge Out The Win. Good Battle. Vote - Av
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01-28-04, 11:16 AM | #14 | ||||
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01-28-04, 11:27 AM | #15 | |||||
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This was very close, but I have to agree with everybody. Aus, you're my boy n' all, but you killed yourself with a few crap lines. I liked a few of em, but you really hurt yourself with a few.
Av, you dropped good. Not as good as you usually drop, but nonetheless you did well. You had a few played lines like the cry your i's out lines. You had a few lines that stood out, but consistency won you this. Good battle, props to both.
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