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02-02-04, 07:27 PM | #1 | ||||||
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horud skys (0-1) vs. auspicuous (0-1)
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02-02-04, 09:51 PM | #2 | |||||||
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10 Lines..
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02-04-04, 02:31 PM | #3 | ||||
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yeah
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02-06-04, 04:55 PM | #4 | ||||
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I need an extension feebs.. personal shit
I'll spit tomorrow for sure tho |
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02-06-04, 09:04 PM | #5 | |||||||
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calm down Thug whyte be calm and steady, & It Doesn't help his nerves, ^That I beat him already! Aus hittin shit hard it must be a ramp His weights the 'Talk of the town' ina fuckin detention Camp Auspic + writing + battling= Total Disaster, He'd step his game up but he broke his stair master ... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find, creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind. Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread. Ayo Aus & ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head
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02-07-04, 10:02 AM | #6 | |||||
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Lesson 2: lesson 1 sux
Horud Skys spit? naw, but at least he can bitch.. He was in orgin ill.. til they realized he wasn't the right species of sick.. Imagin this, stick to freeposting cuz rappins not smart.. He believes his Sig?.. herb, lemme serve 2 words.. "Sarcastic Remarks".. ^He'll take that to heart, so im stoppin his fame.. droppin him gay.. Yeah, he had this win..............On opposite day.. This aint dance class, but he's watchin wat steps hes makin Ill? dude ya own crew leader said.. Quote:
Just grope n' bitch, but notice this, ya hope is shit He got this win locked.. but realized he lost the key to open it.. blah |
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02-07-04, 10:49 AM | #7 | ||||
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Vote: Aus...
better all around verse... the sig line got it... then the feeb line backed it up... Horud you've been seemin to not care lately... I don't know what it is... but... My op...
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02-07-04, 02:47 PM | #8 | ||||||
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That 'feeble line' was actually said by me, feebs just posted it
I know Horuds been hav'n sum family issues and he broke his hand so its excusable but he didn't come hard at all Aus had an overall better verse, even though he used an opposite day line the sig line was nice Vote - Aus |
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02-08-04, 06:29 AM | #9 | ||||
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Better Rounded Verse. Punches Hit Harder. In Horuds Verse, You Could See The Concept For A Dope Punch, But Then Never Really Connected All That Well.
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02-08-04, 01:43 PM | #10 | |||||||
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Auspicious fucked this up pretty good...
Much better wordplay... And even a recycled line from me (opposite day)! The personals were much too hard and on mark. The "sarcastic" and the Feeble quote killed this... I liked Horud's opener, but, really it was kinda all alone as far as dopeness. "Stairmaster" was eh..."Drowned" was a bit of a played concept. All around better and more impactful... Aus Peace
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02-08-04, 02:54 PM | #11 | ||||||
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who wants to battle ma I will murder each one of you.
Dont post in LLL again herbie. -Trapt Last edited by Trapt Wit : 02-08-04 at 03:39 PM. |
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02-08-04, 08:02 PM | #12 | ||||||
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Auspicious takes this. Feeble line was dope. Sig line wasn't bad. Opposite day line sucked.
... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find, creavtily is pool of imagination & Aus drownd in the depth of his mind. This was rather decent. V/Auspicious Do you pronounce your name Au-Spi-Shus? Or Au-Spick-You-Us? Just wondering.
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02-08-04, 08:42 PM | #13 | ||||
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Au Spi Shus
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02-09-04, 05:45 PM | #14 | ||||||
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aush wins, yo.
horud .. < well that says it all . |
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