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08-10-04, 08:37 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Shadow(3-1) Vs Superior(2-0-1) (Lightweight Championship)
IP: 6247 B101
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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08-10-04, 10:31 AM | #2 | |||||||
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08-10-04, 10:36 AM | #3 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1496022 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141199 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141198 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...93&page=1&pp=15
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08-12-04, 12:24 PM | #4 | |||||||
bingo!
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your " intelligence" is at a low .............thinkin u can rap-fine.... ur flow aint " authentik" .....remember u bit off baron mind u cant come original as a result............ u will lose this match... could be " betty crocker " and still not rhyme from scratch...* blah ? that must have been ur girl reffering to ur sexuall-skills... ill give your keyboard a virus..and u still wouldnt be textually ill...** .thinkin you can win? reality hits and your dream shatters... not your leader no more..but u can still bow down to master..*** ..bit more, was only caught twice.he bit off more than he can chew.. u bring shame to the game..u were even kicked outa blueprint too..**** ill let ya chew some hott cinnamon gum..still cant spit hott flows... your not a G the only time ur good wit handelin beef is makin taco's... ur not made for rappin..it aint right for u..like a fat man in a speedo.. fuckin mexican..stick to ur day job....make me a damn burritto.... he says " i need and extentsion"...but he afraid to drop a verse.. i dotn blame him..he sucks at text n topicals..his audio's are worse.. ill apply sum " texas justice" defeat you then ill kick u to rap hell...***** DELEON quit wit the act..ur whack..the only time this hispanic.....****** ..........can (w)rap well is at taco bell.......... * he bites..so he cant rhyme from scratch... ** he used to be intextuall ilness *** i used to be his leader **** " deleon got kicked outa bp..for biting ***** used the phrase texas justice..he lives in texas..its also a tv show ****** when i say (w)rap...i mean wrap like a taco..cuz hes hispanic..mexican.. alaso he used to be deleon..he got banned came back as revoke..then.. changed his name to superior Last edited by shadow : 08-12-04 at 02:42 PM. |
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08-12-04, 04:07 PM | #5 | ||||||
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You’re a softy on aim cryin that you wanna drop already…I don’t care!!
cuz this bitch couldnt wipe shit if he was the charmin bear Kid your topical, why you here, go write about how you miss the sun shine Your only getting attached to this loss like bums to tables at diner time Glad theres no feather weight, How do you drop from heavy to light don’t get your panties in a bunch…wait that’s the only way your tight kid follows me threw crews,your weak, but maybe with sum luck You could finger wrestle with katz but still wont get a thumbs up Tell me how‘d you learn to make those wack sigs have you seen any flaunted you post in the a.i forum like you belong with no respond cuz your unwanted Its funny shadows edge gets vet of the month, suddenly you have the name what happen to the skill? like putting in a full dollar and getting ¼ the change i must be getting punk'd this kid is a joke..its easy to seal your fate Especially when your punches are like lazy lovers and never up to date Our battle excited Shadow,He didnt know how to handle the Buzz But I just told him to Be Easy and guess what? it turns out he was.. you just dont know, my words got more pop than justin timberlake askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take?
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08-12-04, 04:32 PM | #6 | ||||
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Tight battle here y'all, real nice....actually alot tighter than the heavyweight contendership match....
shadow... ur flow is always ill so thats a gud start n i thought this was the best verse i've seen from you, some real nice personals on the bitin side and the mexican thing, liked it...nice verse overall dawg..props.. 7.5/10 S... nice verse, liked the shadows edge personal thought it hit well...gud flow thoughout n gud wordplay, ur punches that did hit were hard but i thought u had some played stuff to, the bums to table line...blah...but overall the punches that did hit were clever n maybe slightly harder than shadows, so im gonna give this to u but get rid of the filler lines cos this was real close.. 7.6/10 ^^^really that close but S just robs it... v/S peace n props to both
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08-12-04, 05:46 PM | #7 | |||||
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your " intelligence" is at a low .............thinkin u can rap-fine....
ur flow aint " authentik" .....remember u bit off baron mind Okay!! 7/10!! u cant come original as a result............ u will lose this match... could be " betty crocker " and still not rhyme from scratch...* Okay!! 7/10!! blah ? that must have been ur girl reffering to ur sexuall-skills... ill give your keyboard a virus..and u still wouldnt be textually ill...** Nice 8/10!! .thinkin you can win? reality hits and your dream shatters... not your leader no more..but u can still bow down to master..*** okay!! 7/10!! ..bit more, was only caught twice.he bit off more than he can chew.. u bring shame to the game..u were even kicked outa blueprint too..**** HOTT 9/10!! ill let ya chew some hott cinnamon gum..still cant spit hott flows... your not a G the only time ur good wit handelin beef is makin taco's... [/b] Shouldint be Dissin ur Own Type lol nice 7/10!! [/b] ur not made for rappin..it aint right for u..like a fat man in a speedo.. fuckin mexican..stick to ur day job....make me a damn burritto.... [/b] WHACK PLayed 5/10!! [/b] he says " i need and extentsion"...but he afraid to drop a verse.. i dotn blame him..he sucks at text n topicals..his audio's are worse.. Better 6/10!! ill apply sum " texas justice" defeat you then ill kick u to rap hell...***** DELEON quit wit the act..ur whack..the only time this hispanic.....****** ..........can (w)rap well is at taco bell.......... MOST pLAYED LINE OF THE YEAR 4/10!! 60/90 IP: 6247 B101 You’re a softy on aim cryin that you wanna drop already…I don’t care!! cuz this bitch couldnt wipe shit if he was the charmin bear Hott 9/10!! Kid your topical, why you here, go write about how you miss the sun shine Your only getting attached to this loss like bums to tables at diner time Hott 9/10 Glad theres no feather weight, How do you drop from heavy to light don’t get your panties in a bunch…wait that’s the only way your tight Hott!! 9/10!! kid follows me threw crews,your weak, but maybe with sum luck You could finger wrestle with katz but still wont get a thumbs up Nice!! 8/10 Tell me how‘d you learn to make those wack sigs have you seen any flaunted you post in the a.i forum like you belong with no respond cuz your unwanted Hott 9/10 Its funny shadows edge gets vet of the month, suddenly you have the name what happen to the skill? like putting in a full dollar and getting ¼ the change lol had me laughing nice 8/10 i must be getting punk'd this kid is a joke..its easy to seal your fate Especially when your punches are like lazy lovers and never up to date ok 7/10!! Our battle excited Shadow,He didnt know how to handle the Buzz But I just told him to Be Easy and guess what? it turns out he was.. lol ok 7/10!! you just dont know, my words got more pop than justin timberlake askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take? Alot lol 8/10!! [/b] 80+/90 [/b] V/ Superior
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08-12-04, 06:07 PM | #8 | ||||
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Superior got this..less generic..funnier...better read
Glad theres no feather weight, How do you drop from heavy to light don’t get your panties in a bunch…wait that’s the only way your tight kid follows me threw crews,your weak, but maybe with sum luck You could finger wrestle with katz but still wont get a thumbs up i must be getting punk'd this kid is a joke..its easy to seal your fate Especially when your punches are like lazy lovers and never up to date Our battle excited Shadow,He didnt know how to handle the Buzz But I just told him to Be Easy and guess what? it turns out he was.. ^dope Vote S |
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08-13-04, 01:01 PM | #9 | |||||
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Both of you were good
Shadow: your shit was nice but you do topicals?? your sghit was iiight some good punches and ok personals ya flow was ok and ya structure was great Sup: your shit was good, nice drop good verse, your verse overall is good you had good personals and punches V/sup for a better verse
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08-14-04, 12:11 PM | #10 | |||||
infestin these emcees
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your " intelligence" is at a low .............thinkin u can rap-fine....
ur flow aint " authentik" .....remember u bit off baron mind 7/10 u cant come original as a result............ u will lose this match... could be " betty crocker " and still not rhyme from scratch...* 7/10 blah ? that must have been ur girl reffering to ur sexuall-skills... ill give your keyboard a virus..and u still wouldnt be textually ill...** 8/10 .thinkin you can win? reality hits and your dream shatters... not your leader no more..but u can still bow down to master..*** 7/10 ..bit more, was only caught twice.he bit off more than he can chew.. u bring shame to the game..u were even kicked outa blueprint too..**** 9/10 ill let ya chew some hott cinnamon gum..still cant spit hott flows... your not a G the only time ur good wit handelin beef is makin taco's... 7/10 ur not made for rappin..it aint right for u..like a fat man in a speedo.. fuckin mexican..stick to ur day job....make me a damn burritto.... 5/10 he says " i need and extentsion"...but he afraid to drop a verse.. i dotn blame him..he sucks at text n topicals..his audio's are worse.. 6/10 ill apply sum " texas justice" defeat you then ill kick u to rap hell...***** DELEON quit wit the act..ur whack..the only time this hispanic.....****** 60/90 You’re a softy on aim cryin that you wanna drop already…I don’t care!! cuz this bitch couldnt wipe shit if he was the charmin bear 9/10 Kid your topical, why you here, go write about how you miss the sun shine Your only getting attached to this loss like bums to tables at diner time 9/10 Glad theres no feather weight, How do you drop from heavy to light don’t get your panties in a bunch…wait that’s the only way your tight 9/10 kid follows me threw crews,your weak, but maybe with sum luck You could finger wrestle with katz but still wont get a thumbs up 8/10 Tell me how‘d you learn to make those wack sigs have you seen any flaunted you post in the a.i forum like you belong with no respond cuz your unwanted 9/10 Its funny shadows edge gets vet of the month, suddenly you have the name what happen to the skill? like putting in a full dollar and getting ¼ the change 8/10 i must be getting punk'd this kid is a joke..its easy to seal your fate Especially when your punches are like lazy lovers and never up to date 7/10 Our battle excited Shadow,He didnt know how to handle the Buzz But I just told him to Be Easy and guess what? it turns out he was.. 7/10 you just dont know, my words got more pop than justin timberlake askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take? 8/10 80/90 v/superior |
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08-14-04, 12:26 PM | #11 | ||||||
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Superior Wins 5-0
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