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03-03-08, 08:25 PM | #1 | ||
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03-10-08, 12:39 AM | #2 | |
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This was a quick read, pretty decent drop. But if your going to drop a piece this short, then the rhyme scheme and vocab with multi's really need to be on point.
Keep Writing.
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