iight im listenin sounds liek its gonna kick hard..

yeah it did nice opener...mic presence im feelin it...and you hittin this beat hard..just lower ya adlibs a bit na'mean...its to obvious you have adlibs..and it shouldnt be like that..but lyrics is fire...and chorus is dope im noddin to this...iight finally another good audio cat in here nice stuff kid...2nd verse is kickin still nice shit man..sounds alil like eminem style no offense but it does..but you rippin it none the less...if you stepped ya quality up you'll be a danger to these audio cats in here ..but man chorus is good...real good at that...i like this be ..imma give you oh damn hold up 3rd verse..tight tight..i was just about to say it was good just alil short i guess not..lol good shit man Rv mcees this is what tracks should sound like if you claim your a rapper..na'mean lyrics shouldnt sound ass maybe ya quality cuz we aint rich like that to get studio time and what not but man imma give you a 8.5/10 iight 1ne..

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...Bronxs Finest NUCCA!!!..FaLL BaCk ...

^^ Good lookin man thanx for the constructive feed

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