http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170366

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jea..checkin in.....10-12 lines

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^^he's scared.lol

whatever .........

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170177

We kno' Marv . .

can’t get a chick . . even tho’ it’s not that hard, bitch
feel tits? he couldn’t touch first bass as a rookie guitarist
hard dick - but no hope ya fucked, no girls show ya love
hos treat ya pics like broke water dishes,
with comments like “ busted pitcher” & “broken mug”//
sayin your goods some gamble, i didn’t even wanna drop 5 on you
might as well call me Lotta Love Handles . . i’m waist lines on you
got money so often? not with them raps so don’t try and lie ya jerk
you only stumbled into the Front Office . . tryna FIND SOME WORK!!
drive by & start buckin’ ya punk, park & blow ya tee up
then ya get stuck in the trunk, like misguided peanuts
thinkin’ you gon’ win ya must be Looney, Kas rip apart this clown
stroll down victory lane? . .
we all kno’ thats one block Marv won’t be Martian down.

Take your gay parade down loser's alley.

14 lines???...12 was da most ima drop 12 so whuteva wreck do is his choice....

fam u n ya team is real quer,ya chest? oh i'll squeeze da steel there
and paralize ya stupid ass trust me u "wont" eva leave dat "will-chair"
u pussy y would i even give u shots,claim u a thug so since u pac....
i'll put da ass of da gun 2 of ya head n "beat-wisdom" like da only win u got
stop forcin raps...dis kas bein sick shit is all a act,dis battle u lose it scrap!
ya moms a "Ex hooka" she use da "bend ova 4 buc(k)s" like "Warren sapp"
my gun is da "king of pop" so hope da berreta jam,but im betta fam...
u'll neva get-a-fan & ya punches like "micheal jack's crib" they "neva land"
if ya cd eva come it be weak dont waste time promotin-each-song...
kas feel in his "sole" he gon "da-feet" me lol nigga u "toe-tally" wrong..
dis fag cant manage a post...so whut can he know bout handlin coke
ur skillz aint "develop"..u dont get da "picture" like da "camera" was broke

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^^he's scared.lol

kas:

can’t get a chick . . even tho’ it’s not that hard, bitch
feel tits? he couldn’t touch first bass as a rookie guitarist
^^good metas dope opener 8/10
hard dick - but no hope ya fucked, no girls show ya love
hos treat ya pics like broke water dishes,
with comments like “ busted pitcher” & “broken mug”//
^^funny as hell but stretched 7/10
sayin your goods some gamble, i didn’t even wanna drop 5 on you
might as well call me Lotta Love Handles . . i’m waist lines on you
^^wack 3/10
got money so often? not with them raps so don’t try and lie ya jerk
you only stumbled into the Front Office . . tryna FIND SOME WORK!!
^^dope bar lol 9/10
drive by & start buckin’ ya punk, park & blow ya tee up
then ya get stuck in the trunk, like misguided peanuts
^^lmao@misguided peanuts.. dope meta good punch 8/10
thinkin’ you gon’ win ya must be Looney, Kas rip apart this clown
stroll down victory lane? . .
we all kno’ thats one block Marv won’t be Martian down.
^^dam doooope meta marian-looney << sick lol 10/10

overall : 45/60 (75%)


marvjay1009:

fam u n ya team is real quer,ya chest? oh i'll squeeze da steel there
and paralize ya stupid ass trust me u "wont" eva leave dat "will-chair"
^^dope multies decent punch 6/10
u pussy y would i even give u shots,claim u a thug so since u pac....
i'll put da ass of da gun 2 of ya head n "beat-wisdom" like da only win u got
^^good personal 7/10
stop forcin raps...dis kas bein sick shit is all a act,dis battle u lose it scrap!
ya moms a "Ex hooka" she use da "bend ova 4 buc(k)s" like "Warren sapp"
^^lol good bar 6/10
my gun is da "king of pop" so hope da berreta jam,but im betta fam...
u'll neva get-a-fan & ya punches like "micheal jack's crib" they "neva land"
^^wack 3/10
if ya cd eva come it be weak dont waste time promotin-each-song...
kas feel in his "sole" he gon "da-feet" me lol nigga u "toe-tally" wrong..
^^good meta 7/10
dis fag cant manage a post...so whut can he know bout handlin coke
ur skillz aint "develop"..u dont get da "picture" like da "camera" was broke
^^played 2/10

overall: 31/60 (52%)

vote: Kas

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creativity-kas....barely any
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i felt kas won this battle because his punches were hittin harder then marv's....marv just needs to elevate a lil bit more on his punches....good battle on both sides

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fam explain ya vote

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

ok ok this was a decent battle, but kas had a slight edge but i was diggin marvy j's verse too but the guy kas had some major punches and wordplay in his shit, it took bout fifteen minutes to get the love handles punch but when i did that pushed me over the edge i was dyin laughin the broken mug busted pitcher line was ill as fuck, so basically thats what did it for me marvy's verse had all the good stuff too there wasn't nothing wrong with it but the wordplay in kas verse pushed him over so i'm goin wit kas


vote= kas

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Kas:

got money so often? not with them raps so don’t try and lie ya jerk
you only stumbled into the Front Office . . tryna FIND SOME WORK!!
drive by & start buckin’ ya punk, park & blow ya tee up
then ya get stuck in the trunk, like misguided peanuts

Vs.

Nothing of marvs.

ya verse was kinda played. like the neverland punch.

v/ Kas

Kas murdered it.
Dunno what happened with MaRV, but not good enough.
Kas had some witty ass punches in his verse, glad to see it.
There were plenty of quotables. Godo job.
aRV, check tutorials for elevation, pretty battle records obviously won't help you here.

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