Just a open mic to show off my vocab tecnique. what do ya think?

My mind and lyrical science combines to define defiance,
I'm Einsteins hybrid wit reactions ten times that of a lion's

My cerebral grows cataclysmic flows that explode like nuclear nodes..
.to errode vocal tones, Rhymin at frequencies unknown to the outer layer of... the ozone, wit words so sick they deterioratin your bones

Leave you under covers and bed sheets when my thoughts release at increased speeds,
My punches bruise the sound barrier enablin you to hear unspoken speech

Wit inhuman capabilities I gouge eyes to show emcees who the prince of darkness really be, Makin sure you remember me, I'll render TnT to enemies that blow your mind then stitch your memory (oohh)

You must be out ya mind to try to confine me cuz I break out faster than grabbin poison ivy, Gangsta? like willa ford bad is all you wanna be, Couldn't be cold blooded if you got pumped wit frozen I.V.

Wit fascist tactics, I'm crackin bastards like hackers do for passwords, the medusa of rappers, spittin back words, is the only time your pose holds complex stature.

Uppin............................................. ......

Your vocab' was alright - rhyme used some clever phrases. ie: "I gouge eyes to show emcees who the prince of darkness really be".
Some of it seemed forced though like your second line - didn't really seem to make sense to me. Were you talking about mental reactions and if so why would being ten times faster than a lion be of note, or were you talking about physical reactions and if so why mention Einstein?

[ok Uppin....................

didn't like it much...





vocab was ok... you didn't say anything... and didn't say anything new or exciting...

Verb rates this at a... 4... not good... but no garbo...

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You Did Use Volcabulary, But The Volcabulary You Used Didnt Say Anything.. There Was Really No Point To This Drop.. If You Could Get Those Multi's & Volcab To Work Together To Produce A Drop With Meaning... Then You Will Improve Alot

thats for that evolve.............uppin............:-)

Good vocab you have that..........i would like to see emtion thrown at me with this type of quality vocab......you know? Shit has to move me in order for me to feel it........it almost has to be poetic......Feel me? Thats why im called the Emotional Poet.........im all about emotion...but dont let others bring you down.........you do your thing!........peace

thank you eleete, uppin some more opinions........

so..dictionary in one hand, typing with the other?

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