For english class... im actualy posting this here so i can retrieve it at school tomorrow and print it because my printer was broken... but ill take some feedback too...

Sonnet 1

A I first studied this single blank sheet of paper
B Realizing that anger could take only my speech from me
A But I know I could never attempt to deny this later
B You hold in your hands, written evidence of what I try to be

C I have been working to always be kind, and to be patient with you
D I also have erased any record of wrongs, and of fallacies
C Simply because love does not delight in evil, it rejoices with truth
D Boasting is understandable, from someone as proud as me

E I have learned that love is a two way road
F and you get what you give, until love is found
E So I am giving it my all, and I will try not to fold
F Hopefully it is true, what goes around, comes around

G So I keep note of my emotions with no shame to my image
G Your name is forever in my heart, and my heart is my lyrics

Hopefully most of you know about sonnets and their structure...
This is more of a sonnet that was written from an inner-self type of creativity... so it wont be fully comprehended by most... thanks for the peep..

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lol interestin way to print a piece....

i usually use a disk...but seriously i neva knew excatly what a sonnet was...

is this in iambic pantameter? i neva understood that...

had several teachers try an tell me but i neva got it lol...so if it is mad props to u...

n e ways... i really loved this piece...flow was excellent an i just loved that first stanza...shit was illness...deep piece

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