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Old 11-27-04, 03:34 PM   #1
50Cal.
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Old 11-27-04, 03:36 PM   #2
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Old 11-27-04, 04:03 PM   #3
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Old 11-27-04, 04:31 PM   #4
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Smells of old paint
spilled alchol and stale cigareetes
I can see the stained carpet
tattered and ripping in many places
Like the old sheets that cover the windows in darkness
The phone book under a table leg
and another under the couches corner
The recliner that doesnt open anymore
and the old lamp that doesnt shut off till you unplug it
The hunger of no food and even more
i can remember what hunger is
To search the refridgorator and find only cold air
and a open box of baking soda
To search the cabinets
and find only a few cans left over
which you are too young to cook
maybe even too young to reach the stove
I can see the other children on christmas
showing off thier wonderfull toys
Thier sleds and video games and other things from thier giftlists
Thier action figures and all thier goodies in thier stockings
I remember how sad i was
I wrote Santa such a nice letter
and this year i even sent him a map i drew all myself
maybe i shouldve drew better?
Because for some strange reason
no matter how good i was
Santa always forgot about me every year
I remember mom cooking
but i dont remmeber food never being near
Mom was cooking something bad
something that destroyed her
the thing that destroyed us
I remember the cold
how the blankets were never warm enough
How i woke many nights cryed
and no comfort came
no one checked to see if i was ok they wouldnt care if i died
Only sleep came to help me overcome
all the hardships i faced
i see the death all around me my life as a savage
and i realize
most my memorys are nightmares that actually happened

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Old 11-27-04, 05:16 PM   #5
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Introduction

They call me Lucas, Loner, individual, marked with social impunity
never bowing down to the cheerleader and the jock community
outside of the high school cliques never in a crew, just standing fierce
but I hung out with my two best friends namely Alicia and Pierce
they taught me everything but neverwhat to do with jock incidents
Gym class when it happened....football season. quarterback was like president
*22 33 HUT HUT* he backed up and now he just threw the football
"DAMN!" I screamed...oddly it was heading for me....,,,,I saw
So I kept my balance, extended my arms, and closed my eyes
*TOUCHDOWN!* I heard the coach scream, everyone was suprised and sigh

The Table


The very next day 12:00 it was lunch in the reliable cafeteria
Football team and others asked me to sit with em, I'm about to laugh in hysteria
but I realized they were dead serious, so I look at my friends
they glanced and shook their heads up and down and smiled marking the end
I had to do it...I sat down with the team and decided to make conversation
they were dissing others in different crowds and it angered me with aggravation
The bell rung and I say "Gotta go" afraid to stay with them like I was blocked
I walked by the bathroom and someone pulls me in and I was obviously shocked
It was Alicia & Pierce and they said "You Got to sit with them dude"
"And tell us everything they say, whether or not it's cool or rude"

The Decision

I don't know guys, just hearing their voice irritates me deeply
"this is a miracle retard, is your brain suddenly sleepy??????
"The Jock Block is untouchable you've gotta find a flaw"
FINE! Pierce replied by saying "Stand up straight so you'll look tall"
Dude....I'm 6'0..."Yeah! but it wouldn't hurt at all you know?"
Well you've got a jersey so it'll be believe.........hoe
"You can borrow mine...and also Luke....you're undercover"
"and if a cheerleader hits on you....she's now your pretend lover"
I think I got it all thanks for the tips and information
*While Walking Out Lucas says:* I might be the new leader of the HS nation

Life With Popularity


Over the last few weeks I turned into a monster hungered by power
now a labelled jerk, like the good in my heart has been devoured
went out with the boys one day to terrorize a part of the city
old folks looking at us, like the new generation was made of pity
anyways, the captain had a fake ID and bought us some beer
I couldn't see myself like I had now been clouded with fear
afterwards, we went outside and made our way to a backlane
the guys grabbed a dude, and put a cover over his face acting insane
bruising every inch of his body, and laughing hysterically
we ganged up on him, he was laying in the ground pathetically

Devastation Of Endings.

One of us pulled out a loaded gun and handed it to yours truly,
And Said " shoot this bitch ass fool in the head and do it cruelly
I froze for a second debating against myself deciding what's right
thinking of holding back but of that vision I just lost sight
I just decided to do it so I crouched and pull the cover off his head
but what I say that moment I prayed I would just go drop dead
I was staring in the eyes of my best friend Pierce he looked devastated
I put my head down.....amd the gun I cocked... it was not imaginated
and that's the tale of deception and the end of a innocent life shattered
try to forget that moment,but it's a memory of mine..that won't be battered
 
Old 11-27-04, 05:17 PM   #6
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^............................god too much typing
 
Old 11-27-04, 05:41 PM   #7
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Old 11-27-04, 05:58 PM   #8
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Old 11-27-04, 06:21 PM   #9
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lol i could dq you for uppin that twice on diffrent names lucky i like you whore!!and i know youve been owned
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Old 11-27-04, 06:25 PM   #10
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just checkin tha polls out for this...good drop by both
 
Old 11-27-04, 06:41 PM   #11
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hehe............................................
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Old 11-27-04, 11:24 PM   #12
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Old 11-28-04, 04:08 PM   #13
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Voted For: For$akeN

woah.... i thought you'd come dope on this one too empire.... but it looks like as if the topic poerty didnt suit you....yours was quite ok
EMpire: yours was iigiht.....i thought you'd come more deeper in this poerty you had nice and deep meanings though... structre was messed but ya flow was really iight....
FOrsaken: you took the lead throughtout the poem...it was very deep and strong in its topic and meanign..i didnt like the first verse of it however.... didnt like how you worded it...
VOte FOrsaken ..... i really though emp would take this easly..but.....
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Old 11-29-04, 07:47 PM   #14
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Old 11-29-04, 11:09 PM   #15
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