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05-15-05, 12:29 PM
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Odi et Amo
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No-Dimensioned vs Solo
IP: 0E89 9DF2
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Topic: Open Wound
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05-15-05, 03:28 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
ch.............ch..............check.............. .....
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05-15-05, 06:00 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
and dropped...................... Total happiness, my whole life could've been summed up in those words Something beautiful, symbolic, like the first flight of a newborn bird Because she came into my life, my average existence was transformed Like a troubled youth confined to a life of crime suddenly reformed Because with her I had meaning a reason to not give in, to go on living Only for her to leave my life, a cruel act of god, there is no forgiving We were the Romeo and Juliet, two halves combined to make the whole Life is unfair, one moment passed and I am left alone in a great black hole I could have done something, if only I had been quicker to her side If only I could have been brave and helped her, she wouldn’t have died Frozen in the moment, my greatest fear unravelling before my eyes My throat burned as I yelled to her but it was like they were muted cries The car skidded but to no avail, I couldn’t even turn away from the collision Wishing to be blind entered my mind but nothing would escape my vision The pain was instant, her eyes closed before she even hit the ground I rushed to her side too late, I wanted to cry but I made no sound My love lost, my life over, my heart stripped of all feeling I had inside An empty shell, now I have no happiness, I am starved and deprived Every day it cuts deep, like a knife in the chest that will never come loose Beaten by the pain, my mind projects it I’m a slave to emotional abuse It’s all I see, it’s all I hear, it’s like I am punished for my failure to save her Ripped apart every moment trying to hold on to the love that I gave her But slowly it slips away, I have no emotion, I have no reason for being I close my eyes at night, but never sleep, her face is all that I’m seeing I am cut off, deserted on this earth I have been left totally marooned Forced to live all of my life suffering from an un-closable open wound.
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05-20-05, 01:31 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
well i have to say this was a close battle................
judging by both verses though i think i won!!!! WERD!!!!! CLOSE THIS!!!!!!
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05-20-05, 02:40 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 764C 1B96
Closed due to opponent not checking in.
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