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05-07-07, 04:16 PM
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Broke as hell
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"Make A Move" - *New!! Shear Kaughn!!*
IP: E0B7 5677
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241887
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3165329 www.soundclick.com/sherekahn
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05-07-07, 06:01 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
flow is good for the beat...but a few words you don't enunciate well...it was a quality rhyme scheme...I don't remember ur voice sounding like this...different...good tho...some good lyrics here and there...overall solid...Hook is good...but the "sick man" cudda be said with more creativity to make it stand out...Also, quality sounded a little over processed. 7.5/10 track...solid
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05-07-07, 06:07 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: E74B 3D80
yea always loved them violens in beats.. sick beat..
told u on AIM this a sick track feelin it man.. lyrics is simple but nice gets the topic out good.. flow is nice, loven the hypeness.. the hook i liked too kept it original i felt this a lot man didnt really find any flaws in it 9/10 homey tight work
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05-09-07, 02:39 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: E979 6945
came in good. decent lyrics. like the first part of the chorus, dont like that pack of wolves talk... like that hard, hard, card part.
like the overall concept. liked about all of it
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05-09-07, 04:52 PM
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New to RV
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IP: DEFA 906B
I ain't a bigg fan of this beat. I like tha way you deliverin' this. It's unique, ain't to energetic, n it don't stay tha same, but it's consistant. It's good. The flow is ehh, at times, it was aiigh at 1st. Towards tha end it kinda fell off. The hook was ok, it was kinda dry though. It wasn't much. STill pretty nice delivery, especially towards the middle. It was lovely. Still the flow is jus aiigh here. The flow started to sound better in the 3rd verse, but y'know, you still had them lil' drop off moments. But ey, this is still a pretty coo' track. I liked it.
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