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-NERVEZ- 1 16.67%
verbal violence 5 83.33%
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Old 06-21-04, 01:16 AM   #1
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
-NERVEZ- vrs.. verbal violence

IP: D6FB 7DDA

aight 12 line spit
first to 5 wins
due in one hour
u spit first~one~
 
Old 06-21-04, 01:58 AM   #2
-NERVEZ-
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From: EastOaklandCalifornia
IP: 12CA C5E8

I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you]
fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal]

you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien]
spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium]

this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific]
what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific]

this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear]
so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer]

like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop]
on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot]

lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent]
i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT]

holla back
 
Old 06-21-04, 02:30 AM   #3
-NERVEZ-
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From: EastOaklandCalifornia
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i thought it was due in an hour? .............your turn
 
Old 06-21-04, 03:05 PM   #4
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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aight yo sorry if i didnt do this last night but i had to get off early but heres ma verse


if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse//
u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse//
dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez//
this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves//
crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent//
damn son ya breath stink try some trident//
i could out flow him even if i was mild violence//
bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united//
he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend//
he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded//
he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies//
ima whole new era of raps endagerd species//
ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch//~one~ holla bak
 
Old 06-21-04, 03:08 PM   #5
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From: colorado,Ft.Morgan
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aight yall could be uppin them votes now
~one~...
 
Old 06-21-04, 03:40 PM   #6
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From: Florida
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-NERVEZ-'s Verse
I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you]
fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal]
...that was stupid...

you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien]
spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium]
the alien part was stupid..the 2nd line was aight..

this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific]
what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific]
what the fuck in the water out there? <---made no sense

this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear]
so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer]
shit was aight

like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop]
on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot]
shit was aight oo...

lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent]
i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT]
sht was aight..*a lil' bit
6.7/10

Verbal Violence's Verse
if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse//
u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse//
shit was good...

dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez//
this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves//
shit was ok..a lil' bit bad

crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent//
damn son ya breath stink try some trident//
shit was aight

i could out flow him even if i was mild violence//
bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united//
shit was good

he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend//
he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded//
shit was aight

he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies//
ima whole new era of raps endagerd species//
shit wasn't good

ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch//
...stupid...
7.2/10

Winner: verbal violence
 
Old 06-21-04, 03:44 PM   #7
damaged1
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From: 510-Oakland
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wow,this is filled with wack punches ...

"like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop
on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot
"
^wtf ?

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"ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent
damn son ya breath stink try some trident
"
hmmmmm,nope
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wasnt feelin this battle at all ...
Verbal came harder with punches and some personals.

Nervez u just had flow,sordof ...
Verbal came over so he gers my overall vote ...
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Old 06-21-04, 03:52 PM   #8
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yea.. pretty much i feel like they do.. nervez you had flow, but there wasent really any other attributes i could point out about the verse.. no beef at all..
you didnt throw that many punches that hit harder then a love tap..

verbal ur verse coo i guess.. but you need to work on your structure a lil bit.. ur lines were a lil bit stretched, but it could jsut my taste.. and you used verbal hella many time in that shit :P..

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Old 06-21-04, 03:55 PM   #9
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From: A place where u need to rap to keep ur head in the game.....itz fucked an everywhere i go i'm put inta a frame....rappin setz me bak an setz me free.....if u niggaz really new me....u just might be able to see
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yo...nervez man... u had flow...cuple nice rhymes

verbal... a lot wuz messed by both but ur linez needa shrink a bit..nice rhymes tho

v=verbal
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Old 06-21-04, 04:11 PM   #10
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yo both ya'll shyt was played as hell.....BUT verbal ya lines r kinda stretched.... n nerves u had some nice flow n punches

vote- nerves..

but yo eitha of u too wanna battle?? holla back @ ya boi

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Old 06-21-04, 04:31 PM   #11
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Verbal Violence...def took this one he had a beeter flow and a whole lot more multis.. his punches landed more too..

both did a good job though..i enjoyed it..
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Old 06-21-04, 04:32 PM   #12
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aight 1-4 uppin for one more votes or some votes...~one~
 
Old 06-21-04, 04:51 PM   #13
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nerves ur verse...

I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you]
fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal]
no rhyme.. its ok 6.5/10
you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien]
spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium]
2nd line.. okay first sucks 5/10
this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific]
what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific]
1st line is wack 2nd line is ok.. 5.5/10
this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear]
so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer]
ive heard the carreer line too much 5/10
like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop]
on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot]
one of ur better lines.. 7/10
lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent]
i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT]
ur best line.. 7.5/10

if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse//
u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse//
sucked. 4/10
dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez//
this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves//
how do you get served on the net? good 6.5/10
crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent//
damn son ya breath stink try some trident//
structure and flow are off.. bad second line.. 5/10
i could out flow him even if i was mild violence//
bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united//
good line. *giggles* 7/10
he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend//
he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded//
another good line.. 7/10
he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies//
ima whole new era of raps endagerd species//
nice i liked second line.. 8/10
ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch//

overall i think we can see that verbal merked nerves.

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