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08-02-05, 03:06 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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_Define Sonning_
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Homie Can you believe.......These emcees peeved at me
Can you Define Sonning?....Is it One man taking in a seed And To.... possibly breed, feed and tend to those needs but .....you might father "creeps" if you raise with speed Take heed croppution leads to greed there are cheaters Black folks children of the "cottan"......but did we raise "wife beaters"? No and our anger is like" heaters" we're concealed wit safty but when provoked.....were revealed to kill....and take souls that ache me Definie Sonning?.. Ta confidence geting "stung" like "May- Bees"(maybe) After ya best drop...The very one u insulted you said u can't take me Define Sonning? Got you feeling shitty like tissue in crappers Sonning Me............ is "unheard" like "deaf trinidad rappers" but......I've fathered so many.....so why Im I bothered with "Trini"  ILL sybliminal spit Turn men to mouse...I won't fuck wit "minie" Define Sonning? This whole track... and If you kno it's directed towards you....U mite as well suck it up be a man and respect it Define Sonning?....Merkage leaving ya very own spits in ya throat yeah hold it in......Like "Macreep" fan mail It's hard to end on a "good note" This was kinda a sybliminal track...but meh....feed plz... gotta post my link...
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08-02-05, 03:56 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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08-02-05, 04:36 PM
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in your system
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word, not bad, punches were subtle, but there, also had a metaphorical outreach as well, didn't focus on just the diss, well done; you have a pretty good handle on structure, how to write, rhyming, flow was inconsistent in areas though, so i guess just work on that, word......keep up man
rtf on the meaning of music in my sig 
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08-02-05, 04:57 PM
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Middle Weight
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It was ight....nice flow in this.Content needs a little more iunteresting factors in it.Conceot for the song is a little ...blah.
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08-02-05, 05:57 PM
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Middle Weight
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yeah hey I DON'T GET CREDIT BITCHES ON THIS SITE WEAK AND SHOW NO ATTITUDE IN THEIR WRITINGS BUT ANYWAY DAMN MAN WHY DO YOU NEED ALL THEM FUCKING WHACK ASS DASHES FOR NOT ALL THAT GOOD I GUESS A RAPPER COULD USE BIT AND PARTS BUT NOT THAT GOOD
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08-02-05, 07:51 PM
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in your system
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anyone can spit random dribble that form somewhat of a rhyme scheme.... oh wait, you don't even do that.
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08-02-05, 06:13 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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......thanx for the feed and MadRapper wtf did u say?...............
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08-02-05, 06:20 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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yeah this was directed toward macreep............
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08-02-05, 06:54 PM
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Middle Weight
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i SAID THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE IS NOT GOOD RAP IF IT WAS THESE WHACK ASS POETRY HEADS ON THIS SITE WOULDN'G GIVE YOU CREDIT
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08-02-05, 07:01 PM
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RV aint Dead
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its was str8 man
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08-02-05, 07:24 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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what u want beef wit me now man...u must be out yo rabbit ass mind.....don't fuck wit wit me man....
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08-02-05, 08:04 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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^ owned.......
nuff said MADRAPPER elevate be4 u get laughed off this site
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08-02-05, 09:22 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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don't sleep............................
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08-03-05, 03:00 AM
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got u all confused n shit
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don;t sleep..................
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08-03-05, 05:16 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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up..... ...................
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