Degradin niggas with a 100 bars, fake gansgters know who you are
you'd sit here 'n say you paradin round in Hot Cars
yall never had a fight, fallin off the 'jungle jim' is the only time you Got Scars
little paranoid J-Dot sayin ''Nigga'' ..but what For?
how the fuck this Vegetarian gonna have 'Beef' with a Carnivore?
i'll arm-this-whore with ''Protection''...
..which dont matter, cause he cant even get an Erection
little lame, sayin he gon merk a nigga, wanksta wouldnt even know how ta work a Trigga
NOK'd you out Once, an i'll do it Again..
when? whenever the fuck i decide ta grab my Pen..
Mim'z lyrically impotent, flows aint never 'Comin Up'
he got all them wins?...like i actually give a Fuck
try ya luck, run upon me, an see what you Get
he claimin respect? i laught my ass off....
cause i run the street, i aint gotta be a Net Vet
i'm here ta amuse, call it a Pass Time....
supervillain? says its a Sin-to-cut, so how can he claim ''Cryhme?!''
rhyme by rhyme, Esco bring its Consistant..
i put each n every rv member on the spot like a Jeopardy Contestant
i'll shit on who'z ''established'' an stab a backstabber in the Back..
king gon be rollin ''solo'' in a casket when i leave no organs in-Tact
in-fact, this is a full blow lyrical attack, an yes i want war
so please diss me back so i can give you some more
i dont know what ya waitin for, but christmas comes Quicker
hows Oreo gon be a whiteboy an call me NIGGA?
i'll bitch slap this Casper, leave the boy Ghost
Troop takes it in the ass, ''NUFF SAID''..How can he Boast?
Carson looks like a Nazi, never mind him bein an Audio Head
dude trys ta seduce his oppenents ta get them in Bed!
9th degree fell for it, now he suckin Too
poppin lottys pussy, an gettin on all 4's for the Q
i'm so complex my puns have you seein thru ya Rectum
losin my mind schoolin Redbull, i really wish i didnt have ta Interllect-Him..
Lady fiya can get on this dick, me n you sexin, fuck'a Lyric..
her n her whole fam is whore'd...i guess its Generic?
huh? Cali'z parents are fairly odd, he a mexican caucasian..
like errr, what the fuck mr & misses cali are you Raisin?
a crack baby, thats 26 n caught up in beef on a Site..
fat fuck got rhymes? naw...
....even the waist on his pants is more tight!
i got marv in my sight, spark him like a J...
this princess of queens dont got guns, talkin is the only time he spray..
fuck whatever shit yall Say, no your not Nice
skriptz, zig zag an kesse aint seein me like the 3 blind Mice..
cold as Ice, i'll have hotshh on Freeze..
your ''flows intelligent'' kid? what you know bout my Steez?
sayin i need hotter punches, an dickridin my Opposition..
claim your number 1? shit, get on a ''pole'' an you'll be in the right position!..
these disses aint even a Mission, just careless Fun..
saken can hide, but he gettinbout as far as Fat Joe if he tries ta Run
hunt you down, beat a bitch then Ride Out..
i'd say i'ma fuck u up, but your sexualitys already In Doubt!!!
this the main event, shit an its over befo' we reachin 3 rounds..
PHAT mic? shit, you could compare ya skill ta ally mcbeals Pounds..
i love how the hammer Sounds, so i constantly Pull..
i spit like the clips Empty, an Mistah authentiq remains Full
ho nigga loved me in the Jury, i'd constantly cypher a Delight..
he even said ''yo esco, i love yuh raps, i wish i could bite!''
who the fuck is ''Forgotten Flows''? ...shit we dont even Remember..
i think wyclef was spittin bout you on ''Gone Til November''
theres not an RV Member i wouldnt consider hatin..
half the time they bagg on others, when they should be grabbin they pens an Creatin
thinkin ya all perfect, well i got News...
ya verses are like 16 year old kids trynna buy cigs, ya just get Refused!
now onto some Crews, mobb mafia? i just Laugh-at-ya, ya all Weak..
BLUEPRINT? ha ha, ya could of at least come up with somthin UNIQUE!
Copyin names, trynna play Games, ludacriously Lame..
searchin fa fame, actin like RV is ya whole Life..
i cause Tension among miltary minds so much they trynna cut it with a Knife..
pain n strife, emericans finest? HA, Call me ya royal HIGHness..
sparkin splifz, yall spittin myths, I'm forever Internally Sick
stick the peice ta ya eye, have u sportin a patch like Slick Rick
thesw warning shots, you want fire, shit i'llk Spark-It
have you bitches like Aladdin all over my Carpet!!!
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This was suppose ta be a collab with Daz, but the dude did his anyway, so this was just somthin quick dissin RV, Fuck yall!!

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Pretty Good Man Weerd Nice Vocabulary Bad Structure Though

aight, thanks..

uppin fa some feed folk

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I got left out

wow maybe you and me were cool

who knows

not bad but im pissed i had nothing in their about me

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I am Here To Save You All

ice we was both koo with ya...lol....but maybe next time homie
i was feeling a couple parts of this esco...i kno it was supposed
to be a collab..lol,.my bad......i liked this line the most
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sayin i need hotter punches, an dickridin my Opposition..
claim your number 1? shit, get on a ''pole'' an you'll be in the right position!..
.roflmfao........that shit was dope......
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structure wise, meh, im usta readin ya ish, we rolled 4 a while...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

dopeness...im a famous nursery rhyme........not bad....good for a quick spit down....haha

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ahh i guess its time to drop one of these myself... and show you cats how its really done..



decent piece

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

^ do it flow...and try harder than 15 minutes

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thats your extent of feedback flow...?seriously man....
thats just lame

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

oh fine daz... the line about me was sick the rest was wack> is that betteR?

work on your structure and your rhyme scheme is fucked up... i dont like how you break one line into 2 lines just so people dont say you stretched the bar... everything kinda dragged on you should have made the beginning the best part... then you would have caught everyone attention... decent wordplay and some solid punches

6.5/10

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thanks for the feed yall...

uppin

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yes that was sooooooooooooooooooooo much better..........
its just if you dont give feed how do you expect people to elevate
or know what the reader wasnt feeling bout the piece.....
i appreciate you takin the time flow..(even if it wasnt my piece)

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

That ally mcbeal line has been used against me 3 times....but overall nothing spiecal...

6/10

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thanks for the feed again yall!!!

uppin this....

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