ooh shit...my fault...LMAOOOOOO...a mistake..I'll report it.....

Voted For: ThatNigga

That: You had all personals which I like, you just stated your punches but they hit pretty hard. First 3 bars where nice, last bar was just filler so it was pretty weak.

Cdusit: Your rhyming seemed forced especially in the first couple of bars, had some alright wordplay but nothing special, concepts were ok and so was flow. Nothing that stood out though really.

So I got That taking it cos he had some decent personals which stood out, where as I didn't like much of Cdusit's verse.

Could you both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

Voted For: ThatNigga

echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit
You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit
^^boo, boring
Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread
your spitting dead science like physist found dead
^^corny n a bit too simple
Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure
Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure
^^lol corny but okish ("like" punches usually aren't that good)
at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga"
your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure
^^simple similes, okish
Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's
............................after I get sinister and finish ya.
youll have no direction in life like toubled teens
^^nah, threat and not a funny one so booo

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Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down
Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town*
^^heh, ok
This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle
Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle**
^^haha, ok, but played concept
Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this
How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?***
^^heh ok but kinda weak
I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done
its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one......
^^eh okish

ThatNigga came more direct due to him having personals, but neither came with much wit or originality, no hate though, keep elevating, at least you're not wack like most newbs

VOTE ON A BATTLE IN MY SIG NOW, THANKS

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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

Vote on my battle both of you, thanks.

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Voted For: ThatNigga

wow, u've really elevated since ur first battle...
im so proud of u

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Voted For: Cdusit

Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down
Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town*
umm...not really 3/10

This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle
Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle**
nope.....2/10
Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this
How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?***
nope again.....2/10

I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done
its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one......
best line but its ok.....4/10

no good punches....structure was decent...but nothing was good that caught my attention
11/40 = 28%


echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit
You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit
not a hot opener but ok......4/10
Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread
your spitting dead science like physist found dead
3/10
Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure
Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure
lol...ya but not a real hard punchline....4/10
at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga"
your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure
aiiight......4/10
Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's
............................after I get sinister and finish ya.
youll have no direction in life like toubled teens
3/10....didnt feel it

18/50 = 36%

Weak battle but vote goes to Cdusit

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yo it was kinda hard but i would have to go wit cdusit on this cuz his punches were a little harder and he had a few little bits of wordplay mixed in.i cant vote so im jus givin feed back.no hate thatnigga,we cool

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Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit - iight spit, your flow was good and you had good rhymes, and hard punches.

Best Line - echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit
You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit

Worst Line - at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga"
your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure

ThatNigga - iight spit also, you had an iight flow also, and some ok punches.

Best Line - Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down
Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town*

Worst Line - I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done
its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one......

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I think CD took this one. I liked his flow better, and his punches were hitten harder. That you need to work on flowin' better.

Vote - CDusit

RTF
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