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6 bars/ 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

punchline it up..

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Expired battle win - close

GrEeN PaRtY! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 11:56 PM.

AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 12:01 AM.

green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty
i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly
you could never devour this, with your cowardness
nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch
hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack
formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz
got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open
because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion
fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching
then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking...

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Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name?
So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne..
Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude..
This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools.
Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus...
knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game.
Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win..
While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin.
Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts..
No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch....

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Straight verse man, hopefully peeps will vote......

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straight back at ya......vote up ppl....................

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Voted For: AITZ

yo you where kinda soft hitting again but you won

aight you need to really elevate and get better becuase your tiered rymes aint gonna work agian....and battle beter people becuase all the guys you battle suck...but yeah once again your verse flowed alot better so thats why you win

green:you need to get better at personals and prewrite your verses a few days in advance becuase all of your bars where wack, sorry for telling the truth but just elevate...

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Voted For: GrEeN PaRtY!

GreenParty

Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name?
So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne..
8/10-Came out with a nice personal in ya opener
Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude..
This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools.
6/10-Kinda weak...didnt come hard enough man
Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus...
knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game.
5/10-Didn't really make sense to me
Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win..
While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin.
7/10-Alright personal
Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts..
No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch....
8/10-Nice personal in ya closer too

Green-No real punches in ya battle, was mostly personals....structure was alright, but could use improvement

Overall-34/50

AITZ

green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty
i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly
6/10-weak opener, rhymed seemed forced
you could never devour this, with your cowardness
nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch
8/10-A pretty good line nice punch n multi
hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack
formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz
6/10-Weak
got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open
because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion
7/10-2nd line was alright, 1st was weak though
fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching
then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking...
5/10-Last bar made no sense to me at all

AITZ-Work on punches n personals in ya battle...structure was off too, need to elevate some

Overall-32/50

Vote-Green

Green took this one by a hair....a pretty weak overall battle...neither came with any decent punches....Green took it because he at least had some personals in his drop. You both need to try and elevate and get some better vocab

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uppin this ......................................!

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Voted For: AITZ

holla at ya boi when you done wit dis...you got my vote. nice punches and multis...up ya flow tho. 100

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

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good battle to both im just leavign feed because it was close but green i liked the fact that you had some personals but the lines that werent personals i felt were lacking
other guy your verse was good but you lacked in personals but most of your punches hit harder
|however i think green would have gotten my vote for having personals


thanks for leaving feed on the cs 7 deadly sins collab

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aiight..........werd up ill holla at you...lol weeeeeeeeeerrrrdddddddddd uppin 4 votes..............

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2 DQ'd votes....thats fuckt up.....yo we uppin 4 votes yall

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