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10-12-06, 01:48 AM
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-BTR-
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New FLyer...feedback welcome
IP: B08B 609B
This is a flyer thing im workin on for my church..all feed, criticism, suggestions and advice is welcome.
 I left feed on Daubs http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235868 |
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10-13-06, 04:55 PM
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-BTR-
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IP: B08B 609B
lets get some feed people. come on.
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10-13-06, 07:32 PM
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I Got Money In Tha Bank
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ay im feelin it
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10-13-06, 08:40 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Aight man.....the biggest thing I noticed is the fact that it's for a church function, but it's in more of a street style font. I think the Scriptina font at the bottom fit the subject perfectly, and of course you can't use it for all the fonts, but I'd use more traditional type fonts or reader friendly ones. I don't really know how to explain it, but I just don't think the font really fits. The rest is bomb diggity
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10-13-06, 11:15 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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so say im walking down the street....
and this dude is passing out your flyers to this event do i really want to grab it, and have to squint and see wtf its a flyer for? because right now the text you put on there makes me do that it blends into the background wayyyy too much the background itself has wayyy too much going on i would lower the opacity of the crowd layer sure its going to look a bit plain but with flyers the most important part is actually being able to get your product across dont get me wrong, the artwork is important as well but do things that dont cause so much commotion in the art simple things, yet make it eye catching hope that helps
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10-13-06, 11:54 PM
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scotia's finest
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yeah man wut tizz said make me have to squint to read that shit id pass right by tha dude an not even look at it
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10-13-06, 11:58 PM
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I Got Money In Tha Bank
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^quit lying
you know you would notice it, it would just be hard to read so stop agreeing with tizz and actually say somethin...
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10-14-06, 12:00 AM
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scotia's finest
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ok but what you said doesnt change tha fact i wouldnt look at this.......
so keep ya comments to ya self
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