word, yo. Me and pra'ject rippin' some shit up. club shit here. tried some new shit on the hook, so lemme know how shit turned out.


www.soundclick.com/itsdakidspul

Intro: Pra'ject
Hook: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Bridge: SPuL
Beat: Relik Records

LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235935
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235798

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eehhh i dont like how u guys speeded the beat u guys sound like chimpmucks n shit maybe its s/c fault but hook is str8 .....delivery i dont like it.....u guys were on that speedy flow lyrics is cool..... i like the lyrics in the hook but it jus sounds wierd ehhh overall not a joint id personaly listen to but overall gud shit rtf This iz my Lost prayer

sounds pretty good just lower the tone of the vocals n its straigh n less chipmunky

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lol thanks for catching it. But uhh it's SC fault, it's not supposed to be that fast. lol I just reuploaded it again, but shit keeps happening. If y'all can peep again on lo-fi it'd be appreciated. As for Ecko, I got you on the RTF

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I RTF..... up....

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LMAO. that song Sounds ILL as chipmunks. lmao..oh shit..

Regular it's pretty nice but listenin Lo-Fi takes something away from it, so i can't leave real good feed.

I love the Chorus. it's got a real good club feel to it. ahha man the chipmunk version kills me ..lmao that shit is ILL.

will leave more feed after i stop listenin to teh chipmunk version and listen to the real one. lol

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

lmao @ the chipmunk shit.....ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


But yeah, I'll peep on Lo Fi. I remember you showing me this anyway.....lol.


yeah, lo fi sucks ass man. I like the hook man. SPuL's verse was pretty straight too. I liked the meal to go line...lol.

Prahject seems to have a nice swag on these tracks. Sounds like the slur on words comes in a little too strong though. It's a nice swag you got going, just seems to be a little over the edge in some spots.....


Good shit though guys

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LOOOL MAN

spul go to band administration and click edit to ya spul page and itll say "soundclick speeds up or slows down my mp3" click that and itl get sorted LMFAO at it tho

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....suck a dick faggot.....

aiight lmao thanks to everyone who left feed. I fixed problem now tho

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hha man the chipmunk version is crazy lol man haha

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....suck a dick faggot.....

intro is cool except for huh thing he did sounded like a little girl lol
hook i like it but i kinda hate it you sound like carson jet : / on hsi love song
first verse is pretty cool blled like a perios gay lol but flwo was on point you were hyped up
pra verse is good the only thing i dont like is where you say do what you do in the beggining it kinda blends in adn it kinda sounds liek your mumbeling flow was cool hyped up


overall its an ok track if the hook was changed id probably download it with the exception of the hook this is the best track ive heard from spul in a long time

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ok...hook is good...it woulda been better if u echoed the words u dragged out an had sum addlibs behind them....flow on verse is good...very clubby, nice rhythm...like the little pauses where u say alil catch phrase. Verse 2 prah...awwwwwww man u got jr writer all over ya verse...the a/b flow wit the repeat addlib is VERY jr right there...it sounded tight though, usually u use a jae millz mimish flow, but its a nice blend in 2nd half of verse u went into ya own style but boy was first 8 bars jr writer to a TEE...nice delivery, the halfway whisper jr-like delivery is oozing swag, once u figure out how to flip that into all you, its gon be a wrap fam...keep it up....good track overall yall more of a mixtape banger than like a single though but tight nonetheless def got my head bobbing.....1

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word appreciate all the feed. And triple, word I AM gonna do what you said for final version, but haven't had time since work. but word props on all the feed

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lol dat hook is official man...............feelin it for a club track...

Spul - flow is there ridin beat well.....delivery nice got some swagger alright.......lyrics will make do for a club track....

Hook - official

Pra'Ject - damn brah u switch aliases like i do white tees........glad u back man...nice swagga that yonkers swagga......flow is on point and all that.....nice verse man...

Bridge - makes me wanna dance....but i don't dance...lol

Hook - Official man.....

Overall - make sure yall fix ya'll quality issue and this'll be a banga.......

rtf please on: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235986

pz

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