Voted For: Premanition

Vote - Premanition

Pretty decent drops from both, here's my breakdown.

Flow- Carmelo. I could see that bein' done in audio, it flowed well. Premanition had an alright flow, but it wasn't as nice as Carmelo's.

Punches- Premanition. Played punches from both. Neither cat had any punches that made me go "ouch"...Premantion had more heat on his punches, more of a "fuck you" tone to his punches. Carmelo had some alright punches, but I just felt Premanition's more.

Personals- Premanition. Check his last bar, that was the only hard hitting personal in the entire battle. No attempts from Carmelo for personals.

Wordplay- Carmelo. His wasn't as played Premanition's wordplay, though both cats were pretty basic with their concepts.

Multis- Tie. Some decent multis from both, but nothing that made one cat stand above the other.

So there you have it. I thought Premanition had harder punches, and a better closer, i.e. the personal in the last bar.

If yall could RTF in Antic vs. Rexless, that'd kick ass.

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

Uhhh, Nah.


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Voted For: Premanition

it was a good battl3 n all but i say u won u had peace

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Voted For: Carmelo

premanition:
The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
^^^UHH NOT REALLY A DISS 2 ME
can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
^^^NAH
five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
^^^WEAK...PICTURE LINE'S R KIND OF PLAYED
face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
^^^NO
carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls ^^^BEST LINE IN YA VERSE


carmelorems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
^^^GOOD OPENER
Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
^^UHH DECENT I GUESS
Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
^^NAH
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
^^^^LOL DIS SHIT WAS WACK..


V/carmelo...easily

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Voted For: Carmelo

Damn, BoTh Had Hot ass Shyt.....but I liked the way Carmelo Ended his Shyt better.....
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.Overall FaCtz..
PRE:
dude you had some mad hot lines, only thing u fucked up was ya shyt got borin at the end.. the swollen balls thing.....*thump* if u would have left that out, u woulda got my vote DAWG...

ya best lines to me was...
"five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it"

lol.......nice personal...datz fucked up though 5000 still in front lines..haha..

overall...ya verse was banging, ya last lines just fucked it up...and i dun like the way ur verse looks either...its too plain...lol....put some dots...ore some slashes...nice shyt though..

Carmelo:

Ya Shyt, Flowed well even though u didnt have multis and i think there was a personal i dunno but newayz , i hate the ............ thingy, but i guess, it makes the Point....Ya best lines to me was:
"prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile"

that was creative, and str8 liked that much...

"Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY"

lol....that was funni.....cuz u left dude grimey with that, i loved the outro...

Overall ya Verse was onpoint, i just hate them damn DOTZ....u got em..

sO VOTE:cARMELO..

But i was more into

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Voted For: Premanition

alright i wasn't enjoyin in this at all..the lines for melos verse were stretched, not hard hitting, un-personal, and not very dope...the punchlines where whack as a matter of fact...and premanition..your verse wasn't much better..but you had a couple decent lines that won it over for me.....i feel like you should have been able to do a lot better than this too...but this battle was a waist of my time to read..wasn't even worth the 25 rv


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Voted For: Carmelo

i voted for carmelo he had better rymes and flow

pre. u had some good stuff but carm just over played u

no hate

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Voted For: Carmelo

yea that aids line was pretty funny lol. anyways really like this and didnt take much effort. but pre did really good too. so keep yall heads up players and keep it droping.

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Voted For: Carmelo

The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
dis line wuld of been good in a freestyle


can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
waznot feelin dis

five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
dat wuz ight

face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
boring

carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls
gud name play





prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
gud opener

Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
dat wuz ok

Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
i liked dis closer dat woz nyce


oonly da closer and opener seperated da 2 verses so carmelo getz mah vote