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Old 12-19-03, 04:27 PM   #1
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Swirl around, scatter... i cant be found
lost within the relm, my identity...Sun shine...
but what do i sound like in the minds of all you clowns?
i refuse the crown,
and smack the prom queen in the mouth,
status and elitism's all this worlds about,
i want out, of this umbillical state of mind,
state your reason for coming forth, and go to the back of the line.
idiocy feeds the blind,
sacrafices to the shrine,
life taken and celebrated with a crude outline,
chalk tombstones crumble in the rainfall,
as my pain draws,
reflective fakeness from inlaws ,
and in stalls , on bathrooms on walls,
fuck you written in each one in sloppy letters by adolecent outlaws,
in here, breathe urine and disgust,
rationalize my distrust,
in miss lust,
working my mind like clock work with her kiss and make-up,
so we kiss and make up,
and i wake up,
with my face in front of a quaker oat mirror,
im carboard, and so is the being that im here for,
what reason would i fear your,
creationism surreal tour,
of a world made by an idol made of plastic on my dashboard,
so i made a dash for,
the outer regions of religions, and made a desision not to be one, of the chosen few to lose their minds and feeling of freedom,
psycological resistance, sends me outta control and outta sight,
it's not right
it's not alright,
it's not, NOT alright....that something this wrong can be alright if it's done right...
RIGHT?
WRONG, it wont be long till they've implanted the song, and the seeds of eden sprout and send you on a mindless flight to zion,
so they can spy on,
you're movements, and masturbation,
the last sensation, of accult creation,
catagory this under mistake, production props to freebasin, im free facin, reality and it's abusive like booze hound dads,
smacked in the face, anger forms from sad, as my favorite ballcap falls to the ground like highschool grads, then i had the fool stabbed, jabbed, and upper cut, "fix supper slut" you'll never talk to mom like that again you trucker f*ck.....
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Old 12-19-03, 04:34 PM   #2
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Old 12-19-03, 04:43 PM   #3
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..Hmm..a little deep joint..I like your style..a little different from the most..this piece was pretty decent...Keep up..^^
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Old 12-19-03, 04:57 PM   #4
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your replies were aweful. give good replies in order to receive replies. in fact, go give some good replies right now, and pm me the links, cause this is....

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