A.T. LOCO AND SKRIBBLEZ AMONG MORE

There aint no meataphor to it....
I literally scream (fuck you).... nah mean?
How you wanna be’s whip 18’s but cant rip 16.
NONCENTZ the foul mouth stay’s wilden-
…dissen in freestylen-
I bring terror to wack cats-
on beats like the Halloween movie soundtrack.
Your shit lacks spit with exlax–
you even got fake rapers like what the fuck was that crap?
Im real enough to call fact-
your fans is fake if they helping you go plat.
I been spitting razors out the mouth since ABOVE THE RIM
You aint a dime just cause you a simple~ten-(simpltin)
Unless you got pantium chip for brains….
you wont understand... im No perservetives ...
I bring flavor simple and plain.
The Raw shit raw spit the real no gimic-
Serve rappers in 3 coarses-
and get food critic-endorcements.
you aint equipped with the format for lyrical combat-
just cause you a netcee aint even known from ripping
.com tracks.
Im known on microphone ...
and as a rapbattles PRO LEAGUE with bars-
Cause my punchlines hit and leave you seeing ALL~STARS.
thats a metaphor buy You probably cant grasp that-
Cause you either commercial or a newbie ...
who's not yet liguistically adapt.
But im a break it down right?
Death a literal meaning.metaphors define my life.
The only time im literal....
is when my word compound cause multiple factures-
to staures-
leave your beat break down... beaten down and broke-
most of you is a corny hoax-like april fools jokes.
I rip coliseums stadium and venues-
The only beaf you served was on a 99 cents menu.
Im from NUKE C. a squad 4 squared
with me as a point to make-
So that means im the period and they calculate-
to the sentence that leave you ate(8).

HOOK: yo its noncentz 1/9 of the crew rocking your url-
Cocking your girl-1 of the 9 wonders of the world.
No one in the world is ready to battle me-battle we.
The undefeatable-non digestable un eatable-no refund Non receiptable.
First member of the NUCLEAR CONCEPT family

We can battle any time you want-lets be blunt-
With no fakes rhymes the only LINE I know is FRONT.
Metaphors end wars with m.c.’s on they minstrol cycle-
The only money I submit for they prewrit trash….
is a 5 cent tip for recycled work payable in cash.
Im mass….vast….my compliments are icon~o~clasts-
so when we clash….
You only good for laughs like the def comedy jam cast.
You aint herd of me you must be def……
If not one of the last greats im one of the last left.
The last left of the best-the greatest at tests-
So who tests feel the wrath of flawless academics-
Me field of akademkic is genetics-
Your genetic-compound isnt akedemic- it's generic-
From clothing lines you musically inherit-
to the cause of you being prostetic.
You prostetic cause your life ”makes up” the authentic like cosmetics.
Yeah I said it-and I know im a regret it-
But you live of ghostwriters so you’ll dead it on debit.
I serve lames do lyrical drive byes on wack guys in my lane-
You ill? Nah Your weakness hides worse then sadam Hussein.
My brain storms the reason I reign-
The reason your flow sunk is cause I left you drained.
NUCLEAR CONCEPTS-was once a threat-
but now we something you cant grapple-
against us you out ~matched like balemics playing front tackle.
I blessed you with hyperthermia maken a head cold freeze-
The only way you ever blessed me is if I sneezed.

HOOK: yo its noncentz 1/9 of the crew rocking your url-
Cocking your girl-1 of the 9 wonders of the world.
No one in the world is ready to battle me-battle we.
The undefeatable-non digestable un eatable-no refund Non receiptable.
First member of the NUCLEAR CONCEPT family

ok, the first verse, was kinda choppy in some spots, off on part of the rhyming scheme, ok multis, but it got its point across, so 6/10

I dont pay attention to hooks or choruses

the second verse rhymed better than the first, could of had a better flow but it was ok, ok multi's made a lil more sense to me, thought who did what verse, i was confused on what was what but thats on the other side of things, this verse got a 7 1-2/10 i think...
drop some feedback on my attendance verse please thanks

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

thanks but it goes perfect to the beat and way i rhyme i just wanted to make sure punchlines were hot

UPPIN AFTER THE EDIT AND THE PUNCHLINES WERE FIXED A LITTLE BUT I THINK THEY READ CLEAR

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed. Thanks.

You had a nice piece here, tight flow and wordplay
Id recommend fixing ure structure
to make it more appealing to the reader
keep dropp'n

hey if you read it you would see 3 names up there thanks!

I thought that was who contributed to the piece, lol

no prob pop i should of made it more clear when i typed i rushed through

pretty tight in my opinion, keep this up.

Damn son.....everytime i be thinkin you cant spit somethin hotter than the next you prove me wrong kid. I thought this shit was hot from start to finish. At times it was hard to keep the flow on point but like you said it goes wit your beat and the way you spit so its all peace. Good drop...and keep it up even tho i know you will....1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

This was good.. The rhymes were basic throughout with a few god ones.. I mean no multis and very few inners.. Your punches were good at times, but horible at others, I understand you was focusing on riding the beat.. Pz

Real nice rhyme...

Kinda long for a self-prop, I thought...

But, you kept it interesting with your metas...

There were alot of dope comparisons in that verse.

Not crazy about self prop ryhmes, but this one wasn't too bad.

6.75/10

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Hey WORD PERFECT, gotta hand it to you homie, i like your style. Serious shit dog, I aint bullshittn you like some other catz. What i mean to tell you is that i learned something from reading your rymes. You got that knowledge/funny style flow. i like dat dog. thats what i just wanted to tell you dog. i hope you keep on droppin rymes on all these wack catz that spit fantasy rap.

THNKS AND UPPIN