aiight heres tha rules

10 lines min
12 lines max
no hate votes
no crew votes
no d/r votes
blind spit
no feedin^^ recyclin...biting
first to 5 votes wins
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this IS NOT my check in

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checkin in my verse will be done in 24 hours ~!1!~

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checkin in

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aiight check it...

you text battling is like a driveby you think you got me but then the caps-lock//
'pitch'-er this you couldnt 'catch what im saying' if you were a 'backstop'//
yo..fuck the shit-on-logic's-wrist cuz my skills always 'break-the-ice'//
i aint bein 'greedy' but....i think its time for me to 'take-your-life'//
this kid is gettin killed when i leave him wit a limp rod//
logic's dick is looking blurry cuz its in and out of pimp rawb//
dont test the illest style, cuz im the best at spittin, while//
logic's just a pedophile who tried to molest his inner child//
like boxin-a-clown, logic fight funny, so watch-ya-get-killed //
because i guarantee this verse'll have ya shook like chocolate-milk//

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your DQ'ed for not posting your verse 24 hours after check in sorry ~!1!~

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bullshit, you drop your verse 23 hours after check in giving me 1 hour to drop, while i'm at work...i go to school at 7 in the monring and don't get home till 8 at night after work. i don't have time, i'll drop tonight first chance i get

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you couldn't pick-up-skill if you were a taxi-driver
and you couldn't stick-a-kill with your gems if you attacked-me-with-safire
suprised ya ain't burnin-vets or earnin-checks
before ya can rise to my level ya gotta learn-to-step
return-ya-vest cause i'ma bout to kink ya lungs like i turned-ya-chest
tongues-n-lips this kid-licks 'shots hard', i'm talkin about how ya sprung-on-dicks
like ya swung-on-ships ya got off-balanced-flows, i'm malice-to-foes
like mike tyson fightin with out limbs ya can't challenge-my-blows
only way ya would steal my lime light is if ya jacked-my-show
scrapin ya teeth is the only way ya goin get plaques-ya-hoe, ya punches couldn't cook up a win if ya attacked-with-dough

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Flow - both of urs flowed equally

Punches - I liked both of your punches but Logic just stood out here
Personals - Beyond Logic had way better ones then Flow

Multies - Obviously Beyond Logic had some but flow didnt have any

Vocab - some vocab

Originality - mostly already used lines nothin new

Vote Beyond Logic

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Flow - Both Had Decent Flow So Imma Say Ya TieD

Punches - Flow Ya Punches Are Good But Logic's Were Just That Much Better

Personals - Again Logic Wins This Cuz He Came Harder

Multies - Logic Had A Couple Good Multis In His Verse But Flow Never Had Any, Try Workin Them In Ya Verse It Will Help Ya Out
Vocab - Logic

Originality - Tie

Vote = Beyond Logic

This Battle Is Closer Than The Score Card Tells But In My Eyes Its Still A KO, But Nice Drops From Both

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

thanks for the honest n detailed feed four n roop


uppin

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thank you for the d/r votes beyond had no punches if u vote on my fuckin battles make sure you know what everything means personal is when u say something about that person that can be used on anyone else faggots

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i had punches in every line, the fuck you talkin about

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uppin for votes

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you text battling is like a driveby you think you got me but then the caps-lock//
'pitch'-er this you couldnt 'catch what im saying' if you were a 'backstop'//
8...tight opener, gud metaphors playa!!
yo..fuck the shit-on-logic's-wrist cuz my skills always 'break-the-ice'//
i aint bein 'greedy' but....i think its time for me to 'take-your-life'//
6...kinda played second line!!
this kid is gettin killed when i leave him wit a limp rod//
logic's dick is looking blurry cuz its in and out of pimp rawb//
7...funny shit, nice line man!!
dont test the illest style, cuz im the best at spittin, while//
logic's just a pedophile who tried to molest his inner child//
7...funny shit again, gud lines comin from u!!
like boxin-a-clown, logic fight funny, so watch-ya-get-killed //
because i guarantee this verse'll have ya shook like chocolate-milk//
6...weak closer man, but ure punches were all consistent really!!


you couldn't pick-up-skill if you were a taxi-driver
and you couldn't stick-a-kill with your gems if you attacked-me-with-safire
5...first line made no sense, taxi drivers don't pick up skill anyway!!
suprised ya ain't burnin-vets or earnin-checks
before ya can rise to my level ya gotta learn-to-step
6...played second line!!
return-ya-vest cause i'ma bout to kink ya lungs like i turned-ya-chest
tongues-n-lips this kid-licks 'shots hard', i'm talkin about how ya sprung-on-dicks
6...stretched second line but ok punch!!
like ya swung-on-ships ya got off-balanced-flows, i'm malice-to-foes
like mike tyson fightin with out limbs ya can't challenge-my-blows
6...ok punch!!
only way ya would steal my lime light is if ya jacked-my-show
scrapin ya teeth is the only way ya goin get plaques-ya-hoe,
ya punches couldn't cook up a win if ya attacked-with-dough
7...nice closer, definitely ure best lines!!

POINTS TOTALS

Flow Intelligent - 34/50
Beyond Logic - 30/50

V/ - Flow Intelligent

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