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Old 02-18-05, 11:46 PM   #1
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New Track from Diabolic...The Come Back

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man this is a track i put together...got off all that damn gangsta shit...just some lyrical shit..quality is alil shakey ckuz i dont have headphones at the time...but whateva yall just leave feed...i left feed on E's track and a HBC track...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/s...osophamusic.htm

Track is called Lyrical Reign

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Old 02-19-05, 09:35 AM   #2
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haha wussup mang b-more rep...anyway this joint was coo mang...chorus is felt...flow was aight...breathe control could be better...delivery was pretty good...clarity one some lines is kinda rough...lyrics pretty good...overall this was a coo track fam...where in b-more you reppin fam?


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Old 02-19-05, 10:40 AM   #3
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aight lets peep. havent heard from u in awhile d. im likin the adlibs in the beginin. chorus is good flow wise, but hard to hear. 1st verse. aight, this shit is hot. doesnt even sound like u at all from ur old shit, u sure this is u? cuz u got mad energy on this. usualy ur layed back style but i love this switch up. quality isnt the greatest compared to ur level of lyricallity. if thats a word. but u feel me rite? second verse is goin good, still a good flow but i like ur first one better. third verse i kinda lost interest. but not cuz it fell off, just cuz i dont have a long attention span. wiat wut? yes good track get at me.
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Old 02-19-05, 12:39 PM   #4
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good lookin on the feed....bump this like a teen in puberty...
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Old 02-19-05, 01:00 PM   #5
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I'm feeling this one. Chorus was tight....effects and everything. In the beginning it sounded like you were holding back a bit......not sure exactly what it was, but maybe it sounded like you were trying to save your breath for later. This track is little trebly.....try adding some lows or taking away some highs (look at me thinking I know what I'm talking about). You could hear a lot of your breath spots as well. If you don't use a condenser at all, use a sock or something......it will hide a lot of your breaths
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Old 02-19-05, 01:06 PM   #6
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nah son...i use stockins
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Old 02-19-05, 01:13 PM   #7
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LOL.....I do sometimes too. I got a wire hanger that I formed into a circle and pulled the stocking over it so it actually looks like a condenser. I made a stand for it and everything and just put it in front of my mic.......lmao!!!
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Old 02-19-05, 03:11 PM   #8
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lol...yea man me too...
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Old 02-19-05, 03:40 PM   #9
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chorus is aight.. a lil' catchy.. i like the beat it's all old schoo mixed wit some video game shit when you explorin a new area just before you reach the boss of a level.. lol nice beat, creative flow.. delivery is really good, ya lyrics pretty nice too. I can hear you breathing but you go (hee) a lot. but it's not real loud.. but quality isn't that bad. i liked this overall. nothing major missing from it, just small lil' things i picked up. some u have no control over like quality. keep doin ya thang and get at ya lady..
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Old 02-19-05, 05:07 PM   #10
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Typing as I listen: beat is nice. Sounds like a Premo beat. Vocals are nice. Mic sounds real clean (for the most part). Sounds liek a polished radioshack mic. First verse was cool. Thanks for not having a 1-syl rhymescheme straight outta 1988. Def no net-flow here. There were one or two spots where the flow got lumpy but you brought it back real fast. Only thing I didnt like, the lyrics were delivered very well, but didn't say anything really. It had multis and such, but wasn't saying anything imaginative or creative IMO. All in all a good track but only place I see it lacking is in the content. Everything else was pretty on point.
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Old 02-19-05, 05:19 PM   #11
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;lol yea man...i kno it wasnt sayin shit really...=\

told u im not good at topics..lol...

oo yea...the beat is Pete Rock if u wanted to kno...
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Old 02-19-05, 05:32 PM   #12
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^ah Pete Rock, ok. And not good at topics? tsk tsk tsk young man, lol. My track is still better though You'll see..lol
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Old 02-19-05, 05:33 PM   #13
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nah...u got me wrong...i can write to a topic...i just dont think of topic...most of my verses is just freeverses...
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Old 02-20-05, 04:17 AM   #14
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yo diabolic, u still got ur old bmore screen name? i havent seen u on in a minute but if u still got my sn fotwenty get at me. im tryin to see u on my mixtape if ur down. shit should be some fire. get at me tho. already left feed so u know im feelin this joint. pz
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Old 02-20-05, 07:50 AM   #15
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Man.. This shit sounds real nice. I think no doubt you got a lot of potential to get a good record deal if you keep at this rap shit for the long haul. You sound more or less professional at the moment, so theres no point in me talking on a technical level about your music. Probably the best thing I can tell you is to keep working on your style and give your music more of an individual feel to it as opposed to sounding like most of the other NY artists out there.

Good shit tho brutha. This is definatly something I would bump in a car.
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