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12-27-08, 11:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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44 Large (Ft. Kidd)
IP: 79B6 C939
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12-28-08, 04:38 PM | #2 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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dat cassidy at the beginning, and the hook? anyway, u second and sounded the way you sound, u tried flippin a few played concepts, like that flip like they should be in a gym line. but uh, heres another listen.
.. cabalas, hot line. could use more adlibs and switch ups, but this more hard than catchy. i aint talkin fat cal when im talkin about 40 and 50, hot line. good grimmy street type shit. just not quiet my steez. think u hit what U were goin for though
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12-28-08, 05:51 PM | #3 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: 79B6 C939
yea, thanks for that, i did used alot of play'd shit.
lol we just wanted some quick shit to get a grimey song. ya know. thanks for the listen.
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12-30-08, 02:04 AM | #4 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 0EB1 61F9
nah not diggin it........
why do you wanna rap like 50 cent? |
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12-30-08, 02:17 AM | #5 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 0EB1 61F9
nah look ill elaborate... your style is sellable... the guy who spit first does what he does good... you do what you do good.. but its just nothing artistic or special about it, it sounds like a g-unit track covered by some dudes with less production work...
maybe its just not my taste of music... ill give it that... but what i would say is that if you want to advance yourself lyrically then start throwing aside the played out mainstream style your bringing and throw down something a lil more............artistically inclined without the gangster crap that everyone does... either way its like music made to a formula to me thats what it sounded like.... |
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12-30-08, 12:36 PM | #6 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: F8ED DB33
lol actaully I agree with you alot.
Really this song was made gear'd towards that audience. kind of something we did to.... give our friends something to bump, stepping out of the lyrical and the spoken word. i'll up some other shit later. but my style is gearin more towards the marketability and stuff. big ups on the feed though. i'll hit you back as ssoon as i can
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