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Old 11-21-09, 09:28 PM   #1
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"What if"...concept track...prolly wack, but ded. to Talksic

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^^There you go my man...

Def. different vibe here...

prolly wack...but ehh...I tried something different.



Simple concept...what if you woke up and realized everything you thought was true was a lie.


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Old 11-22-09, 03:25 AM   #2
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Didn't mind the whole singing pattern at first but once I got halfway into the song it began to get tiresome. I'd suggest just keeping that for the hook and going with the same approach you used in your first verse for the others.
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Old 11-23-09, 10:32 AM   #3
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listening,i like it sounds different,lyrics are cool,feeling the hook,like the i think its saying lies going in and out of left ear than right ear,sounds sick,different vibe sounds good,just switch it up a little bit here and there everynow and then,good drop
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Old 11-24-09, 02:01 AM   #4
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I like it .
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