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12-14-04, 05:11 PM | #1 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Triple, DV, G deuce COLLAB!!!!!!!!!!!!
IP: 36C3 7C54
This track is mad old, an the quality ain't da greatest but still a decent track wit some good lyrics....so peep it an let us know what u think.........holla
Verse 1: Triple Verse 2: DV Verse 3: Deuce Chorus Triple Link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/gdeucemusic.htm
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12-14-04, 05:16 PM | #2 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
"PsyKologikal---home boy, i aint come to party, i came to catch a body"... yeah thats what I always think whenever i hear this beat... triple and dv came pretty good on this, i like the switch between u two cuz triple is a lil monotone and deadly voice is all over the place... deuces part aint bad, he just dont sound as comfortable as the other two, it probly woulda been better if u cut the volume of him talkin over the chorus cuz it didn't really add anything to the track... not bad all in all though- keep droppin 1/1000
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12-14-04, 05:37 PM | #3 | |||||||
Duce I Rae
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IP: 1C69 853A
this is a pritty tight track over all could be a bit better.. but shit is pritty hot... Id bump it. and deuce just needs to relax a bit more sounds like hes probly a lil tence in there it just might not be your style of beat and that is fine... good job fella's
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12-14-04, 06:15 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 9E92 6CDE
yea...nice shit so far...
Triple....ya lyrics were ok...quality is good...chorus is ok...prolly coulda had more emotion.. Dv..lol....lyrics were cool too...uality is still ass...llol....emotion is good as usual....funny too..towards the end... Duece...lyrics is straight...kinda loud...over the chorus...and ya quality coulda been betta...mybe if u just woulda turned down ya vocals...coulda had more emotion prolly...dependin on how yall wanted it... overall it was a nice track...yall niggas keep droppin tracks..
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12-14-04, 07:11 PM | #5 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
i didnt like this. it had no emotion specially for this type of track
5.9/10 keep it up doe
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12-16-04, 01:18 AM | #6 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Didnt even kno dis was dropped
It was quick track Nice..shit fam...Duece and Triple Nizzle...Nice drops Thnx on Feed fams
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12-16-04, 02:47 AM | #7 | |||||||
Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: 928C 00B1
tight ass shit man....i'd give ti an 8/10....everyone can use improvements...check my shit Back Down.....it's tight....but keep spittin the fire
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12-16-04, 05:23 PM | #8 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 9457 B83E
yea i didnt like it really lol
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12-17-04, 01:39 PM | #9 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Well u suck..lol^^
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12-17-04, 02:29 PM | #10 | |||||||
King of Honolulu
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IP: 9A07 1297
I was feeling this... y'all killed it... not the best quality like y'all said... but it was HOTTT!!!!
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12-18-04, 12:55 AM | #11 | ||||
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IP: FFEC 082B
First guy- Unentertainin, need a better presence, I got tired of listenin
hook- kinda weak, also got tired of listenin Key- ok presence, flow is choppy, on and off the beat Last cat- nice flow, ok presence, kinda fell off in the middle but it picked back up. |
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12-18-04, 11:07 AM | #12 | |||||||
tha illest
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IP: 0825 899A
listenin, chorus is lackin mad emotion, lyrics are descent tho, flow doesnt stay consistant, tripple N you got a good voice but you need to keep it original, and rap about something better, its always the same, just my advice to switch up. once again chorus sucks balls. second part tha vocals are way higher, but man you've gotten better, you stay on beat better nowadayz, but you got a good vocal range you can hit alot of notes, i think this is tha best i've heard from you yet. good work. last dood, alot of static in the recording, and the lyrics are the best from this man, its funny to me. lyrics need to be turned down. i dunno, i think duece came pretty nyce on the mic. tripple N you put a frown on my face, you were elevating for a minute but now your skimpin on yer pimpin. slackin on yer mackin no what i mean?
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