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11-03-04, 01:29 AM | #1 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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Coming With Stuff
IP: 005F B7E2
Coming With Stuff
Pounce on sinners and announce dinners at church then Enter and search the souls of the unrighteous and touch trend Speak words of praise weak nerds get blazed leave herds In a daze like bad grass defeat cows in graze, fly like bees and birds Grab bread and make a meal but fakes deal in junk food Punks rude with calories, have moods and salaries with attitudes In the brain, rivers reaches shores when I deliver speeches galore Shiver and teaches on floors of destruction, and beseeches a metaphor Production of illness, cats try kill this but can’t I get adored Feel warm with a real storm of emotions that could Swarm oceans and drown clowns swimming around in the hood Wear bling and bring peace in the skies it’s a feast for eyes, proceed In crap flow and feed on rap but bleed when slapped with reality gonna need A bandage for the damage now, but somehow manage the true creed I’m a sailor to be free like a whaler at sea looking for Moby Dick Using a Ben Kinobe trick when the force is with me I’m holy and quick See blind flaws with divine laws suck wine through straws Rhymes chew on new behinds like jaws written by Robert Shaw |
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11-03-04, 03:59 PM | #2 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: E31B AA42
It's Aight.wuzn't Feelin The Beggining But The Ending Made Up For It.keep Em Comin'
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-03-04, 08:08 PM | #3 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 10C3 AE8A
I liked this...Im really feelin how you have about 8 different rhymes inside of a rhyme...lol...shit is nice...nice multies...everything flowed well and was in its place...keep droppin...oh...by the way...do me a favor and leave me some real feed on my new open mic...Its called 'I miss you'...aight homie...1
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11-04-04, 05:46 AM | #4 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
thanks for the critiques and props
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11-04-04, 09:14 PM | #5 | |||
Banned
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IP: EFEB C28B
u'r flow is crazy mang...
why dont u holla at me i got a spot for u in violent type in the open mic section holla at me mang.. 8.6 outta 10.... |
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11-05-04, 06:01 AM | #6 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
intensify effect thanks for the props for real
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