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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate or d/r votes
All votes must be explained!!!

Good luck homie

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-03-04 at 09:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BlackMagik has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 08:49 PM.

Tainted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 08:50 PM.

..Ima eat-this-kid, all I see-is-'bitch' when I read-his-scripts..
..above 'heavenly', matter fact, Im on some Jesus-shit..
..watch this geek-get-split, I'm a fire, about-to-ignite..
..watch me sink his ego down-to-the-size, that his penis-is..
..You knee-deep-in-shit, Hiroshima, cuz I'm 'bombin-this-cat'..
..armed-with-a-gat, you dont belong here, dawg ya mom-should-be-slapped..
..you're fucked-if-you-step, give you more than a brush-in-with-death..
..I Take Aim In Newbies Til Everyone of them's Dead..
..Punchin-ya-chest, til ya heart-bleeds, dawg you cant stop-me..
I'm blazing-this-fag, 'shove his face-in-the-glass', like hockey..
..I'm born-tight, this dude 'eats more wood' than termites..
..Get fuckin-mardered, dawg I'm 'comin-harder' than 'porn-sites'..
..A sabage-with-text, How the hell you gonna damage-this-vet?..
..When everytime he see's me, his fuckin panties-get-wet..
..Im back demanding-respect, I stay rough-with-my-bars..
..But the closest to 'hood' you'll ever get, is the front-of-my-car..

yo leave some honest votes yall...1

yo...just thought I'd clear somethin...I didnt know how to do it while postin my verse, but the line that says "..I Take Aim In Newbies Til Everyone of them's Dead.." if you add up the first letter of each word, it spells out his name (tainted)...just thought
I'd clear that up...lol...1

Good Luck man

My flow is like the wind,man, it'll sweep you off your feet
But you ignore the insights, and stay home, beatin ya meat.
Sorry it had to be this way, but it must have been fate,
Throw my weight around here just let the rhymes marinate.
Just let the bullets rip from the steel, tear through ya flesh.
Let the Fe element explode and settle in ya chest.
Shatter ya body up, leave your figure reduced to mesh.
See I stalk in the shadows, ready to pounce on my prey,
The thoughtful poetic scriptures ensuring ya DoomsDay
I leave you lost for words, your grip on the mic full of perspiration.
Your rhymes so smelly like ya constipation.

Heh, didn't know his was gonna be that long. Oh well, hopefully it was enough.

Voted For: BlackMagik

i gotta go wit black magik because he had better word play, punches, and it flowed better.....tainted couldve worked on his punches and rhyme schemes.....both did good.....toough love.....keep it up , both of yall

uppin this bitch..................................

Voted For: BlackMagik

breakdown

tainted

flow- 5/10
punches- 6/10
rhymes- 8/10
structure- 8/10
total- 27/40

fav line-My flow is like the wind,man, it'll sweep you off your feet
But you ignore the insights, and stay home, beatin ya meat.
(pretty good line keep writin dawgz)

blackmagik

flow-8/10
punches-9/10
rhymes-7/10
structure-9/10
total-33/40

fav line - i dunno which one to pick good shyt yo u ripped it return da fv n drop n honest vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=158396

vote/ blackmagik (obviously but jus makin sure so they wont take vote away 1)

Voted For: BlackMagik

pucnhes-BM
pers-BM
mul-none
stuture-tie
meets-none
best-BM

blackmagic wins easy he had punches they were ok not perfect but was ok tainted u need to eleavate son cuz ur crap had no pucnhes was little
WACK was alright BM wins the easy

thanx for the votes yall...uppin this mutha fucka...

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