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Old 02-13-04, 10:52 PM   #1
~Yo What Up~
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From: Phoenix, Arizona
Yo What Up vs. YOzLyricalKilla

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aight bitch........

10 lines

house rules
(crew votes are allowed, cause we're in the same crew, and the loser is out of it)

verses due saturday night at 12 est

blind spits

lets go mothafucka.......
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Old 02-13-04, 10:53 PM   #2
~Yo What Up~
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CHECKIN IN........

ill drop my shit sometime tomorrow cause i got another battle goin tonight........
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Old 02-14-04, 10:50 AM   #3
YOzLyricalKilla
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From: Y.O. aka Yonkerz
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a kidd i set up in a different battle....wtf.....ill just put down what i rote in the last one
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Old 02-14-04, 10:52 AM   #4
YOzLyricalKilla
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From: Y.O. aka Yonkerz
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ayo ayo its young thug comin out jus hear me tho//
most iLLest rythmin indiviual//
hatas out dare are watchin me there actin so damn antilitical//
yo wut up aint no one toppin me so stop actin critical//
get at you listen while i spit at you//
aint kno ghost ritin 4 me ya kno i can spit my own flow//
jus listen there aint no stoppin me no//
aint kno one close 2 me no//
im takin ova ova this rap shit from coast to coast//
thats why i just ate you like a buttered toast//
you iz one wack ass M. C.//
stop actin like your tha king of this R. A. P.//
im the iLLest im the most hot but i neva break a sweat//
so stop steppin and challangein me cuz you aint a treat//
stepping to me you just got fucked up and left 2 bleed//
so now ya heart is skippin like scratched cds//
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Old 02-14-04, 10:56 AM   #5
YOzLyricalKilla
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From: Y.O. aka Yonkerz
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and yo i dont kno if ima win all i know i hate niggaz who swear they all sick and jus cuz certain niggaz aint at they lv ya say fuck em.....how ya niggaz kno if those certain ppl have skillz they jus need 2 learn how 2 use em....so personally i really dont care if i win or lose i just wanted 2 show you a lil bit of skillz from one of those certain ppl.........wun.....im out ill be in lata 2nite 2 see how tha battle is goin...
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Old 02-14-04, 01:32 PM   #6
~Yo What Up~
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^^^spoken like a true champ........LMFAO.......do u not remember when YOU called ME out for a spot in the crew.........fuckin fag.........check it out......yo, yo.....

just dont hit-submit, i knew u were a crap emcee, but even ya spits-shit/
admit-and-quit, u suck, so either quit or ill come through and slit-ya-wrist/

u pretend-to-concur, u claim u spit fire, but ur just a lone-ember/
fuck NAD, tryin to act like u in a decent crew, but u the only-member/

i merk fast and unlock-blurs, i spit bombs, and i swear a shock-will-occur/
i knock-herbs, and when im done rippin u, ur brain will have gone yonkerz/

u just a dumb-blessin, ur best chance is to just ask me for some-lessons/
u rap shot up, so just take this blast from my lyrical smith and wesson/

ur not even part-talk, ur horrible, u bein ill is about as true as a smart-jock/
ima make ur heart-stop, no one wants u here, so get ur shit and start-to-walk/

EXPLANATIONS -

1st bar - crap - shit......easy enough....

2nd bar - in his sig he says fuck everybody who aint down with HIS crew.......which is called N.A.D.

3rd bar - hes says hes from Y.O aka Yonkerz.......

4th bar - self explanatory......

5th bar - the loser is out of the crew........and no one even wants him in........

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UPPIN FOR VOTES HOES!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-14-04, 01:44 PM   #7
Rappin' Master
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this was a good battle

Yo What Up...I liked your flow and your structure was aiight as well. You had some good punches and personals. you could have had some more creativity but you rwordplay kinda made up for it. Keep it up

Yozlyrikalkilla...you had an aiight flow and your structure was good. You needed to have harder hitting punches and personals. Just like yo what up, you could have used some more creativty and your wordplay wasnt as good

vote YoWhatUp

return da favour plzhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114238
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Old 02-14-04, 01:51 PM   #8
~Yo What Up~
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^^^thanx for the vote........

if u fix the link ill leave some feedback on urs............
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Old 02-14-04, 02:03 PM   #9
OliverClohsoff
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From: Queenz, New York
IP: 4577 CD9A

ayo ayo its young thug comin out jus hear me tho//
most iLLest rythmin indiviual//
***wtf sounds like a dr.pepper, np punch and weal personal***
hatas out dare are watchin me there actin so damn antilitical//
yo wut up aint no one toppin me so stop actin critical//
***again wtf very weak, line***
get at you listen while i spit at you//
aint kno ghost ritin 4 me ya kno i can spit my own flow//
***an ok personal***
jus listen there aint no stoppin me no//
aint kno one close 2 me no//
***i can think of a hundred words that rhyme with "no" how come u couldn't?***
im takin ova ova this rap shit from coast to coast//
thats why i just ate you like a buttered toast//
**this is prolly ur best punch,,very sad***
you iz one wack ass M. C.//
stop actin like your tha king of this R. A. P.//
***wtf dat dont count as a rhyme****
im the iLLest im the most hot but i neva break a sweat//
so stop steppin and challangein me cuz you aint a treat//
****finally a good punch, need more of these if u wants to win***
stepping to me you just got fucked up and left 2 bleed//
so now ya heart is skippin like scratched cds//
***o k i take back wat i said dis is ur best line...***

overall: you started off weak and finally picked up towards da end, but it was a lil too late for it though....try to get harder punches and bigger vocab also work on ur structure and flow.....
4/10





^^^spoken like a true champ........LMFAO.......do u not remember when YOU called ME out for a spot in the crew.........fuckin fag.........check it out......yo, yo.....

just dont hit-submit, i knew u were a crap emcee, but even ya spits-shit/
admit-and-quit, u suck, so either quit or ill come through and slit-ya-wrist/
****good hard punch, excellent use of multis****

u pretend-to-concur, u claim u spit fire, but ur just a lone-ember/
fuck NAD, tryin to act like u in a decent crew, but u the only-member/
***o mah fuck..lol…lol.lmfao.***

i merk fast and unlock-blurs, i spit bombs, and i swear a shock-will-occur/
i knock-herbs, and when im done rippin u, ur brain will have gone yonkerz/
**ok punch not dat great*****
u just a dumb-blessin, ur best chance is to just ask me for some-lessons/
u rap shot up, so just take this blast from my lyrical smith and wesson/
**aight good line nice voab***
ur not even part-talk, ur horrible, u bein ill is about as true as a smart-jock/
ima make ur heart-stop, no one wants u here, so get ur shit and start-to-walk/
**wats up with the heart closers….imma say played***
OVERALL:good clean drop, not the best I’ve seen from you but good enough to let u stay in da crew and win dis battle in mah opinion
7/10
vote=yo wat up

hit dis one up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
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Old 02-14-04, 02:18 PM   #10
KiLlEr EmCeE
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o man....nice battle....but yo what up barely takes this for hiz punches and pesonals....his structure was off...but the punches covered all that up
pretty good battle
yoz- it was okay...u rote 2 much but barely had punches with strong impact....u got to work on them and add effort into them....and work a bit on your flow....
punhces: yo wat^
flow: yo wat ^
structure: yozlyricalkilla
overall- yo wat ^....wen i get all mah posts....jus pm me the battle...i need a little left
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144
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Old 02-14-04, 02:19 PM   #11
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wrong link........lyricallabussive pmed me dat......hol^....lemme go find mine......
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Old 02-14-04, 02:24 PM   #12
Virtuoso
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From: ..::Detroit, Michigan::..
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flow-yolyricalkilla
metas- yowatup
multis-YWU
OHHS- YWU
personals-tie...

yowatup..prolly took this battle because his multis.. that was really the only thing he had goin he didn't use alot of metasa n wrodplay to flip line on YLK... u gotta learn to do that if u wanna elevate... trry a different appraoch next time i thik you will find u will have a harder hitting verse...YLK you had nice concepts but they were kinda played out... an simmple multis...

soo final vote....

vote-yowatup...
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Old 02-14-04, 02:25 PM   #13
Virtuoso
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make shore u return the favor an vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3981post1183981

...vote an make shore its honest...... hit this up^^^
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Old 02-14-04, 02:44 PM   #14
~Yo What Up~
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Uppin # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cmon Folk Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-14-04, 04:05 PM   #15
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iight thanx 4 tha votes....i lost datz coo but ayo what up i want a rematch
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