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04-11-04, 09:13 PM | #1 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Gimme some feedback on this
IP: 3240 794D
*This is a song I put together, jus trying to get some comments, it'd be much appreciated*
Chorus: Everything he wanted he took/ Nigga's scared to step up, nigga's is shook/ Can take out a whole block wit jus one look/ Takes life head on, dis nigga's a real crook/ Everything he wanted he took/ Nigga's scared to step up, nigga's is shook/ Can take out a whole block wit jus one look/ Takes life head on, dis nigga's a real crook/ His wives are in his holsters, constantly naggin'/ Reliable never folster, puttin' nigga's on meat wagons/ He gotta itchy trigga finga, gats rang out like singas/ 24/7 blinga, quick to be a bitch neck ringa/ he eats bitch nigga's for breakfast, an real nigga's for dinner/ Take des nigga's neckless, no remorse, a real sinner/ Complete disregard for humanity, his gats spru profanity/ His life's insanity, but to him his gats are vanity/ His life's complex, but as a man he's very simple/ If nigga's flex, he'll pop they ass like a pimple/ Ridiciously ambitous, violent down right vicious/ Notoriously malious, malign dis nigga has crime enshrined/ Everything he wanted he took/ Niggas scared to step up, niggas is shook/ Can take out a whole block wit jus one look/ Takes life head on, dis nigga's a real crook/ Thug life he injested, for time invested, found comfort an nested/ He been tested, arrested, for peice of mind he quested/ His life coincides wit what his upbringing provides/ Mom's beat'em wit da force of da tides when he made strides/ He couldn't understand why mom's hated him so much/ Or why the belt always gave his ass a touch/ Nowadays those memories are an emotional crutch/ He now carries a chip on his shoulder, da size of a boulder/ His emotions are colder than scully an molder/ All problems are resolved in bloodshed, ground painted red/ No more words said, jus make sure everybody dead/ He lives by da creed, make everybody bleed/ His concious is nowhere in sight, niggas think its tight/ It ain't right, how da fuck does he sleep at night/ His demeanor is meaner then every nigga he knows/ Dats why his beemer is cleaner, an got all da hoes/ Dis nigga runs da block, an got bitches turning tricks/ Goota a payroll for da cops, he sittin' on bricks/ Everything he wanted he took/ Niggas scared to step up, niggas is shook/ Can take out a whole block wit jus one look/ Takes life head on, Dis nigga's a real crook/ Everythin he wanted he took/ Niggas scared to step up, niggas is shook/ Can take out a whole block wit jus one look/ Takes life head on, dis nigga's a real crook/ I watched his rise an fall, his strides an stalls/ The eyes of those mauled, his pride was overhauled/ His demise was a surprise, first his paper was on crunch/ He was finally chastised, it hit faster than a tyson punch/ His pockets got smacked up like tina turner, he couldn't conceive it/ Da niggas of past murders came wit da burner, he couldn't believe it/ They came round da corner blastin', he was caught offguard/ In my mind his expression is everlastin', my soul forever marred/ He live fast, an died young, an left behind a son named cory/ Now he's the past, but he went out in a blaze of glory/ He would have never imagined that this would be his story/ He played da game, for paper an dames, yearned for street fame/ He thought being a thug da shit, lifed life in the fast lane/ Got plugged wit slugs quick,latest obituary bolsters his first & last name/ |
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04-11-04, 10:24 PM | #2 | ||||||
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nice flow
but the concept of it was waaaaaaaay over-played, so really man.... it was boring especially the chorus over, nice flow but boring
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04-12-04, 09:40 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
His wives are in his holsters, constantly naggin'/
Reliable never folster, puttin' nigga's on meat wagons/ He gotta itchy trigga finga, gats rang out like singas/ 24/7 blinga, quick to be a bitch neck ringa/ he eats bitch nigga's for breakfast, an real nigga's for dinner/ Take des nigga's neckless, no remorse, a real sinner/ Complete disregard for humanity, his gats spru profanity/ His life's insanity, but to him his gats are vanity/ His life's complex, but as a man he's very simple/ If nigga's flex, he'll pop they ass like a pimple/ Ridiciously ambitous, violent down right vicious/ Notoriously malious, malign dis nigga has crime enshrined/ ^^^^ best lines.... i got the mobb deep shook 1's feel on ya chorus an it is played out loads... elevate ya creativity blud..... 1. krysis...
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04-12-04, 09:49 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 4BE7 67E6
His wives are in his holsters, constantly naggin'/
Reliable never folster, puttin' nigga's on meat wagons/ He gotta itchy trigga finga, gats rang out like singas/ 24/7 blinga, quick to be a bitch neck ringa/ he eats bitch nigga's for breakfast, an real nigga's for dinner/ Take des nigga's neckless, no remorse, a real sinner/ DAT Shit is Off The chain Nigga.. G00d Shit holla at the Nigga u do audios?
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04-12-04, 10:53 PM | #5 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo son I wanna do audios son but on the real I don't got the shit to do it son, yo let me know if you know how to hook a nigga up, man.
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04-14-04, 12:31 AM | #6 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin for some more comments
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04-16-04, 01:48 AM | #7 | |||||
New to RB
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IP: 3240 794D
yo that was tight son...i liked it...especially da chorus
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